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Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Perils of a Pet Owner"

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angel of the quill
 
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more.. okay i love pet stories..
i could tell you a few myself
serenity.. aka.. demon/psycho.... her love is untamed just like her but my furry angel/demon is the best buddy you could have
yeah you guessed it i am momma to a cat. she only loves me
so i set her on auto destroy to the men in my life by the code words... take care of my light work.. aka husband
mouthy aka 16 yr old son
and attitude problem aka 19 year old son
lol
so when i read yours
i was laughing and agreeing
they may be Pets but they can also be some of the most fun the craziest moments
and the dearest friends you can have wearing natural fur.
I totally loved your story.


 Comment Written 23-Mar-2009



reply by the author on 23-Mar-2009
    Thank you, angel, I loved your comments and I admire you for getting that kind of loyalty out of cat.
    Beth
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Wow, with all the animals you've had, you should have tried to take the farm deduction on your taxes.

As a life long animal lover, you certainly have some great stories on the personalities of your animals.

Thesis


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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2009
    Thank you, I like your comments. They have been interesting and I loved them in spite of the problems they have caused.
    Beth
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adewpearl
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You write such damned funny memoir essays - I love the cat who wouldn't use the litter box after just one use. I have always harbored the suspicion that some of my cats were retarded because at least one of them was amazingly smart.
so I know it can't just be attributed to being a cat.
I love the golden lab you pawned off on some unsuspecting person, who in turn pawned it off on someone else. You should do stand up comedy - you are damned funny and always include such great detail. Brooke


 Comment Written 22-Mar-2009



reply by the author on 22-Mar-2009
    Brooke, I love your review. Your comments are boosting my ego. I so glad you find it funny.
    Beth
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This was humorous and fun. I can tell that you really enjoyed your pets despite their lack of obedience and escapades. Welcome to the world of parenting! Terror


 Comment Written 22-Mar-2009



reply by the author on 22-Mar-2009
    Thank for your review and nice comments. I do love all my pets in spite of their strange ways.
    Beth
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This is great, as a pet owner all my life I have many tales to tell and tailwagging friends. I have had aggressive dogs and currently my six cats and one dachshund run my life. This is an enjoyable read and I look forward to reading more about your variety of pets and their personalities.


 Comment Written 22-Mar-2009



reply by the author on 22-Mar-2009
    Thank you so much for your review and your comments. I am glad you found it enjoyable.
    Beth
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First being a pet owner [or should I say, being owned by a few pets myself, this was quite a funny story. I was beginning to wondering if you wrote this as a letter to that English lady who claims to fix dogs by fixing people. Than I realized you weren't being funny, you've had a hard time with your pets.

I like your writing it's clear, and descriptive. You have a nice beginning that hooks the reader. I look forward to reading more about your trouble pet ownership.


 Comment Written 22-Mar-2009



reply by the author on 22-Mar-2009
    Thank you for reading and commenting on this piece. I love my animals but they haven't made life easy.
    Beth
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hehehe This is great, Beth - as a dog-lover, I really enjoyed it. Actually, I am one of those 'people in the country who can't say 'no'. It flows well and fluently. I found just one spag: "charactristics" - characteristics. Very entertaining. :)


 Comment Written 22-Mar-2009



reply by the author on 22-Mar-2009
    Thank you Jazh, I thought I had already answered this one but I must not have saved it. Thank you for finding the spag. I have changed it. Glad you enjoyed it.
    Beth
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Hi Beth,

What an enjoyable read. So witty. You know what they say. Dogs have owners and cats have a staff.

Is Tiffany a real pet of yours? I'm worried that if she's been made to live outside and is declawed, she has no defenses.


 Comment Written 22-Mar-2009



reply by the author on 22-Mar-2009
    Thank you, Louise, This was written several years ago. Tiffany was my cat but she lived to be a ripe old age and is no longer around.
    Beth

reply by Louise Michelle on 23-Mar-2009
    Hi Beth,

    I love animals. I've done a ton of volunteer work at animal shelters.

    Sincerely,

    Lou
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Beth Shelby, this is such an entertaining essay. I chuckled all the way throughout. You do have a sense of humore and your wittiness comes through with every statement. I enjoyed this essay immensely..the world of animals..well done..one nit...

our their personal [out]

jlsavell


 Comment Written 22-Mar-2009



reply by the author on 22-Mar-2009
    Thank you so much for your review and comment and for finding the nit.
    Beth
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I laughed out loud as I read this. We also collect psycho animals, including a cat that would only pee in the toaster! This is a well written and thoroughly entertaining story.

Jo


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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2009
    Well friend, It was your turn to make me laugh out loud. I can't imagine a cat that only pees in the toaster. That is really hilarious. Thanks for the review.
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