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Flash Fiction Collection


a selection of my best flash fiction

  26 total reviews 
Comment by
baskers89
 
 
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Rating of Chapter 1 -
Into the Gathering Storm
What amazing imagery. I really feel like I am there and have a sense of the characters through the description, Beatifully written


 Comment Written 07-Apr-2014



reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
    thanks so much for the kind review :)
Comment by
arunkrishnan
 
 
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
Rating of Chapter 1 -
Into the Gathering Storm
Wonderful work! The lady is sure angel than witch. Some co-incidences make a drastic change in our lives making us wonder if they were a mere coincidence. Excellent prose! Good use of adjectives that bring out more life to the scenes, and aids in visualizing the scenario easily.


 Comment Written 01-May-2012



reply by the author on 01-May-2012
    Thank you so much for the kind words of encouragement and the generous rating.
Comment by
2012 Short Works Writer Of The Year
Realist101
 
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Rating of Chapter 1 -
Into the Gathering Storm
How intriguing! She was a ghost warning him!! I am very impressed with your vivid 'showing' words. I felt the chill, the rain, and the consternation of the main character too. ") Susan


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2011



reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
    Thanks so much, Susan. I really appreciate the great review.
Comment by
2008 Poet Of The Year
Judian James
 
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Rating of Chapter 3 -
Blood and Other Ties
Hey there. I don't know how I missed this one, but when I read the announcement, I wanted to have a look at what you had submitted. Congratulations on your award. It feels good doesn't it? This is excellent and a good piece for your mini-book. "The finger resumed its journey down the length of the flap. "If I am a true Carter, it will prove what a bastard he was. If not, then I guess I'm the bastard"
excellent


 Comment Written 16-May-2011



reply by the author on 16-May-2011
    Thank you so much, Jude. Yes, it feels great. It only took 4 tries :) I'm glad you enjoyed this one--is one of my personal faves.

reply by Judian James on 16-May-2011
    Oooh, ouch. I heard it could be difficult. So another congrats for persevering!!
Comment by
Kokopelli
 
 
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
Rating of Chapter 1 -
Into the Gathering Storm
Very nice. I really enjoyed it - your "words - pictures in the mind" were exceptional. I saw them both - and the follow through from the start to finish kept me engaged.

Congrats on winning the seal - as well as the other honors. The story deserves it. -- And in so few words. Great work


 Comment Written 15-May-2011



reply by the author on 16-May-2011
    Wow, thank you so much, I'm honored by the generous rating and kind words.
Comment by
JMRoland
 
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Rating of Chapter 1 -
Into the Gathering Storm
Hi redrider6612,

First of all, congratulations on the Seal of Quality. It was that announcement that led me over here to read. This is a good piece of flash fiction. It is well-conceived, with a provocative setting and interesting characters. The plot line holds tension and reader interest, and the ending is quite satisfying, and some what of a surprise, which is always desirable in a short-short. Two minor things: check the spelling of "mesmerized" in paragraph 12. Also, in paragraph 2, if you were to substitute "pistol" for "gun", it might sound better to the reader's ear, as you follow soon after with "gum boots".

Nicely done story-written on a professional level.

JMR


 Comment Written 15-May-2011



reply by the author on 15-May-2011
    Thank you for the kind congrats and the great feedback.
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