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14 word love poem (free verse)

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Comment by

c_lucas

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A very good, heart-warming poem of love. This is well written and has a smooth flow of words. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.

Comment Written 15-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 15-Jul-2009

Thank you very much for your kind review. I really appreciate it.

reply by c_lucas on 15-Jul-2009

You're welcome, Jomo. Charlie

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Soulester

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Simple words and simple message combine to make a beautiful heartfelt--and oh, so true--statement. That hand holding feeling is universal. Great job! Don't change a thing! Mary

Comment Written 14-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 14-Jul-2009

Thank you so much for your very kind review. It is appreciated. Lisa

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Healing

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Very touching poem. It brings back memories of someone familiar who in fact made me feel safe and loved me for who I was. The last line says it all though.

Comment Written 13-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009

Thank you so much for your very kind and encouraging review. I appreciate it.

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fastdigits

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The touch, his hand in
yours,not a word is said,
not a whisper is heard, our
short poem reflects the
warmth, the tenderness of
this kind of love, the touch
of your hand.
Well done and good luck

Comment Written 13-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009

Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it!

Comment by

jadedgemini2

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The one great feeling in life is love. And to be able to share the feeling with another for the rest of your life (hopefully) in a great treasure-especially when the simplest thing, such as a touch, can bring on other emotions. I think you did good here. You didn't get 'mushy' or use complex words to try and divert anything, it was just a simple little love poem that painted a simple little picture that spoke for itself......and I love the way you did that! I found it very refreshing:)
Great job and best of luck!
Jaded:)

Comment Written 13-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009

Wow, what an encouraging and kind review. Your words made me feel so good. Thank you so much for taking the time to review my poem. I really appreciate it! Lisa

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Annelisa

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Excellent

This is so lovely. It made me smile. Your words are filled with love and contentment and the feelings shine right on through. Good luck in the contest! Annelisa

Comment Written 13-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009

Thank you so much for such a lovely review! Lisa

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You've crafted a very warm, loving poem.

It conveys many emotions with a few simple words, whose meanins is understood and felt be all.

Good job and good luck in the contest. - Thesis

Comment Written 13-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009

Thank you so much for your extremely kind review. I appreciate it. Lisa

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jadapenn

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Touching and beautiful. Terrific feeling of love and warmth. I liked the flow of the poem. The picture and presentation well done.
Best wishes for the contest. regards jada

Comment Written 13-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009

Thank you so much for your kind review. I really appreciate it. Lisa

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Jomo...

What a lovely tribute to your husband. Many couples today don't seem to find that sense of security....trust isn't always in their foundation.

Lovely words..fourteen words that speak volumes for your relationship.

Thanks for sharing.

Carol

Comment Written 13-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009

Thank you so much for your lovely review. I really appreciate it! Lisa

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