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Diary of a Weight Watchers Fanatic


diets can be hard...

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What a cute peek at the Weight Watcher's diary, Jomo17! I've been there and done that, but maybe not with your sense of humor. This reads well and is very entertaining (and true.) Mary


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2009



reply by the author on 06-Aug-2009
    Thank you so much for taking the time to review my poem, and for your kind words. I appreciate it! Lisa
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Hi Jomo, sounds like a plan to me. I try to keep a veggie platter in my fridge, but don't always stick to it. I like to bake and if I bake, well, you know... Your poem is very well presented with an excellent rhyme scheme. This is a great entry for the contest.

BellaSpirit


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2009



reply by the author on 06-Aug-2009
    Thank you very much for taking the time to review my poem, and for your kind and encouraging words. I really appreciate it! Lisa
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My mother is a charter member of Weight Watchers. I understand the program is very successful for those who can count. I lose track after my third martini.

This is a very good entry for the contest. Good luck with your diet and the contest. Zee


 Comment Written 06-Aug-2009



reply by the author on 06-Aug-2009
    Thank you so much for your kind (and funny) review. I really appreciate it! Lisa
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I enjoyed this as I have been a member of weight watchers, and know how hard it is to have enough will power to stay on the diet. Especially in social situations... Good luck with the contest and with your diet too! Sarabran


 Comment Written 05-Aug-2009



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2009
    Thank you so much for taking the time to review my poem, and for your kind and encouraging words. I appreciate it!
    Lisa
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Very well thought-out poem. I love it. The words are great and paint a vivid picture of the advantages of sticking to a diet. The rhyme is great. The writing is excellent. Good luck in the contest.
Delora


 Comment Written 05-Aug-2009



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2009
    Thank you for taking the time to review my poem, and for your extremely kind and encouraging words. Lisa
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I enjoyed your clever interpretation of the contest prompt and your use of the day by day format. Some of your laments were poignant and others quite funny. I especially admired your using strong rhymes throughout.


 Comment Written 05-Aug-2009



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2009
    Thank you so much for taking the time to review my poem, and for your very kind comments. I really appreciate it! Lisa
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I like this very much - the ups and downs of weight watchers. Does it really work? I like how you have incorporated the whole week. Good luck in the contest and keep it up with the weight watchers!!! luv Jenny x


 Comment Written 05-Aug-2009



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2009
    Thank you so much for taking the time to review my poem, and for your kind comments. Weight Watchers really does work for me. It really isn't too hard to follow either. Thanks again for the kind review and for your encouragement. Lisa
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Fun and true... counting points will make your mirror your friend.
I love the light, fanciful feeling to this poem about the way we look at food and how we have to do many things to overcome this love.
Well done.


 Comment Written 05-Aug-2009



reply by the author on 05-Aug-2009
    Thank you so much for your kind review. I really appreciate it. Lisa
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Jomo17:

I'm on Weight Watchers program too. Started a few months ago and find it pretty easy to stay on it. I don't look at it as that four letter word (D-I-E-T) anymore but as making smart choices for the rest of my life.
I find it especially funny when you write "Barbeque has met its match...Munched on crispy veggie sticks and didn't even frown"....That is a laugh; I do hate giving up bbq sauce.
But I won't miss the pounds.
Well done !
BLUE


 Comment Written 04-Aug-2009



reply by the author on 04-Aug-2009
    Thank you so much for taking the time to review my poem, and for your encouraging words. I love the WW program. It really works for me. You are right, it isn't really a diet, but rather a way of life. I am glad the poem made you laugh. Thanks again, Lisa
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Know several "Weight Watchers", and your poem captures the see-saw nature of their dieting experience. Well-written, liked the daily journal format and happy ending. Good luck in the contest!


 Comment Written 04-Aug-2009



reply by the author on 04-Aug-2009
    Thank you so much for taking the time to review my poem, and for your kind words. I really appreciate it! Lisa
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