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Making Up


A couple forgives each other.

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Kingsland
 
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I liked this one a lot better then the other poem. This one has a lot more passion and emotional attitude. This was just a delight to have read and written a review for... John


 Comment Written 25-Jun-2010



reply by the author on 25-Jun-2010
    Thank you for taking the time to read it. It is very different than your poem. This was mt 2nd attempt.
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Your second 'attempt'? Then I am impressed even more so. I truly appreciate the art of being able to say so much in so few lines. I love this poem of forgiveness and renewed passion. Well done! ~Best, Elizabeth


 Comment Written 30-May-2010



reply by the author on 30-May-2010
    Thank you for the kind review. You must have searched for this poem. It hasn't been posted for months. Thank you.
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Lovely!
Wow!
I've been away from FS all week, so I peeked into your portfolio (didn't want to miss anything)- and I'm so glad I did!

The sparks are flying from their lips and hearts. You did a fabulous job of incorporating strong imagery - and in only 15 words!

I like this poem. It tells a complete story. Beautifully flowing free verse poem. You picked the perfect artwork to accompany your writing.

Best wishes in the contest, Barbara! I'm so glad to see you writing poetry too!
Nic


 Comment Written 05-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 05-Mar-2010
    Thank you. This contest was over back in Dec. It didn't do well.
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Semper Fi
 
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This is a nice poem, Barbara. You misjudge your talents. I think you should write more free verse...Good luck in the contest..Bravo! .Bob


 Comment Written 05-Jan-2010



reply by the author on 05-Jan-2010
    You're being sweet. I appreciate it.
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MAMONIA
 
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Only your second attempt at poetry. Girl, you are a natural.
The picture, the words, the message is beautiful. Don't have to tell you to keep up the good work. I absolutely loved it.


 Comment Written 02-Jan-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jan-2010
    Thank you for your kind words.
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poetknowit
 
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I absolutely love the way you describe a love that never dies even though injured occasionally by conflict. It can be instantly reignited by a kiss!

I like the way you describe this pleasurably as a re-birth.


 Comment Written 02-Jan-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jan-2010
    Thank you for your kind review.
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wheelswrites
 
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Short poems are not easy. To capture the essence of arguing, making up, and love in such few words is ecstasy. Such beautiful imagery. Hope you win.

Sally


 Comment Written 02-Jan-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jan-2010
    Thank you for your kind words.

reply by wheelswrites on 02-Jan-2010
    You're welcome.
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misscookie
 
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If you hane just started writing poem . thean your going to be real hot soon . I see you have the making of a great witer I love the movement of your poem and your words made me feel as thought you meant them.


 Comment Written 01-Jan-2010



reply by the author on 01-Jan-2010
    Thank you for your kind review.

reply by misscookie on 01-Jan-2010
    your welcome
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percival86jack
 
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I can feel the pain then the forgiveness and the tender moments that followed.
Sometimes differences and the understanding and forgiveness that follows make a relationship stronger. Nicely done.
Keep smiling and stay happy Barbara... Hugs, Jack


 Comment Written 01-Jan-2010



reply by the author on 01-Jan-2010
    Thank you for your kind review.
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I'm always amazed how
so few words can say so
much -- ah, it is always
so nice when making up.
We can't bear to be
upset with each other.

Good work, Barbara. Margaret.


 Comment Written 01-Jan-2010



reply by the author on 01-Jan-2010
    Thank you so much for your review. You are such a good poet, I value your opinion.

reply by Margaret Snowdon on 01-Jan-2010
    My pleasure. M
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