Football Chapter 12 part 2
Katherine finds out who's been watching her.
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E-Mail From God


Decided to send an angel to earth

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MissMerri
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Hahahaha! : ) This is very cute Ronni. I was SO anxious to see what God was going to say in His email. And I'm afraid I was even more disappointed to learn I would never know! :P Nope, I didn't get one. But I'll keep trying to be better. Maybe next year... ??
Well done, and certainly clever and amusing.


 Comment Written 10-Feb-2010



reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
    Thanks for the fun review Merri. This was just fun to do, and
    NO...I DIDN'T GET ONE EITHER!!!!! Maybe this just gives us
    pause to be on our best behavior...which we are supposed to
    do anyway. Glad you enjoyed...take care....God Bless.
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tonydem
 
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You clever, clever lady. This was very funny. I've gone back and scrolled down a couple of times just in case I missed my email but alas twas not to be. God must read my work. Haha
Great bit of humor, Ronni
Your friend
Tony


 Comment Written 10-Feb-2010



reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
    Thought you'd get a laugh out of this one. Appreciate your fun
    review. Don't feel bad, I did get the E-Mail either!!! Having
    read your work, God surely has a sense of humor about it by
    now too! LOL..smile...Glad you enjoyed dear friend.
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hahahahahaahahahhahahahaahahahahaahha hysterical I really laughed thanks i needed that! I can't wait to read more of your work!


 Comment Written 10-Feb-2010



reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
    Thank you John for the furn reaction review. Glad you enjoyed.
    Sometimes we need a good laugh; so much serious stuff on here.
    Take care and have a great day!
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anabellapongasi
 
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Hi there. Nice one. I didn't get the email so I must be one of the 95%. Well, this is a very creative piece. Humorous but makes one think too. I enjoyed it. God bless you!
Anabella


 Comment Written 10-Feb-2010



reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
    Thank you Anabella, this was just a fun piece the help us keep
    perspecitve. Appreciate your uplifting review, and so glad you
    stopped by to read. Have a terrific day!
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Lynne
 
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Clever girl ! Very cute idea!
God sent an E-Mail to these 5%. Encouraging
and praising them. And, He wanted to give
them a little something to keep)) A little awkward to start a sentence with the word and. Maybe also?
Great job ! D~


 Comment Written 10-Feb-2010



reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
    Thank you Lynee, for the intriguing review, so glad you saw
    the humor in it and enjoyed. Will check out your inquiry here.
    Thanks again for stopping by, and have a beautiful day.
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Dear Ronni,

That is a good picture with this piece. I would suggest that you skip a line between the picture and the story, and also center it. Good Job!


 Comment Written 10-Feb-2010



reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
    Thanks for your encouraging review, and your helpful suggestions.
    Glad you enjoyed, and have a terrific day.
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Hilarious post. No, I didn't get one either darn it. But I'll keep checking my inbox. Maybe it got delayed because of how far it had to come. :-)

Thanks for sharing. Great post.

Regards, anabelle


 Comment Written 10-Feb-2010



reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
    Thanks for the fun respons review. So glad you enjoyed this
    bit of humor. Was just fun to do. Take care,have a great day.
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