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Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Desperation"

A woman is stalked by a fan

  23 total reviews 
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RazberryBullet
 
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Looks like Cathy fell for Norman after all ;p

Liked these lines: I will still win and there's no prison in my future. If I can't have Cathy, I'll kill us all.'... 'Alone is like when no one is around. Isolated is feeling all alone even when lots of people are around.' Good description between the two words :)



 Comment Written 25-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 25-Mar-2010
    Hey Raz,

    I hate it when my books end. It's a good feeling coupled with a whole lot of..I could have said..this and that. In the end, it has to stop.

    Thank you so much for the great review and your comments.

    Hugs,
    Gayle
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Perp Ihebom
 
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Wow, no other sound disturbed the morning indeed. This is a great story that carries a lot of warning, especially for young men and women who are desperate to get hooked up to someone in the name of love. kudos


 Comment Written 25-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 26-Mar-2010
    Hi Perp,

    Yes, this is a story about obsession. If you want you can read it, don't bother with a review, just enjoy in your bookcase!

    Thanks again,
    Gayle
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fictionwriter
 
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Oh no. What a place to end the chapter. Now I'll be wondering what happened after the fall. A gripping piece of writing. Well done.

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 Comment Written 25-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 26-Mar-2010
    LOL, I was naughty, huh? I am so glad you liked this one and want you to know how much I appreciate you reading along. It meant a lot to me!

    Hugs,
    Gayle
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