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When no one seems to be listening......

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Isaiah Ramesses
 
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This story is a deserving winner. Very faithful, and thought provoking piece. Well written and quite entertaining.
Good job.

Isaiah Ramesses


 Comment Written 30-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 30-Mar-2010
    Isaiahm

    Thank you so much for the kind review. Carol
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fictionwriter
 
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If only we all had that kind of understanding afforded us each day. I love this, and will look for those small signs too. Great job.


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 30-Mar-2010
    Joy,

    Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Appreciate it as always. Smiles, Carol
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patmedium
 
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You might of won, Missus... but you cheated! THIS is a true story, isn't it? No imagination involved at all, none whatsoever! ... However, I will keep your secret, Carol!!! Congratulations on being a worthy winner, dear.
I have read this wee one with a broad smile and GREAT pleasure. Pat.


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 30-Mar-2010
    Pat...

    Thanks...Carol

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    xxx
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Perp Ihebom
 
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This is very beautiful. You deserve the laurel you got for winning that contest. I marvel at your ability to create such a meaningful story in 100 words. kudos


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 30-Mar-2010
    Perp,

    Thank you so much for the kind and generous review. Smiles, Carol
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Sharkey
 
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A beautiful scene created with just a few simple words. Touching and beautiful are the words that come to mind first, and also inspiring, I really enjoy your work.


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 30-Mar-2010
    Sharkey,

    Thank you so much for the generous comments. Carol
Comment by
zuluruby
 
 
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A good piece, imparting all the relevance succinctly. Sounds like the voice of experience to me. Sad, if that's the case, but inspiring and uplifting. Congrats on the win, very worthy.


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 30-Mar-2010
    zuluruby

    Thanks so much for the kind and generous review. Smiles, Carol
Comment by
medicnate
 
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Great job with this flash fiction piece. You manage to tell an entire story within a few short words. It's very heartfelt and tugs at those strings gently. Nice work here.

~medicnate~


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 30-Mar-2010
    medicnate

    Thanks for reading and commenting. Appreciate very much..Carol
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amada
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Congratulations in winning the first prize in this the 100 words marathon. Your story is complete, beginning, problem, and a miracle for an end. Inspirational!


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 30-Mar-2010
    amada,

    Thank youu so much for the kind comments. Carol
Comment by
Belinda Amy Pantyboy
 
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To write such a delightful piece of work in just 100 words is incredible. Stories like this always catch my attention. You have told an amazing story which melted my heart. Yes you can have six stars for this as you deserve it. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 30-Mar-2010
    THANK YOU SO MUCH.....

    Can't thank you enough for the kind comments and the wonderful dusting of stars. Smiles to you, Carol
Comment by
Nicki_Mist
 
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Congrats on your winning the contest and on the awards. A lovely and sad poem with a beautiful ending.The flow was great too. Keep on writing like this for you have the talent.
Nicole


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
    Nicole,

    Your words brightened my morning...thank you so much. Smiles to you, Carol
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