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I'm Here!


When no one seems to be listening......

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Comment by
Alaskastory
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'I'm Here' is inspiring for the faith it eludes. A lot of story is told in so few words.

The writing is beautiful and deserving to be a top winner.

Congratulations!


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
    Alaska,

    Thank you so much for the kind comments and wishes. Smiles to you, Carol
Comment by
Kathryn Varuzza
 
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I really liked this.
It was powerful.
Moving.
Interesting.
Good descriptions.
Nice image.
I liked the ending.
Good luck in the contest.
Kathryn


 Comment Written 27-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
    Kathryn

    Thank you so much for the kind response. I really appreciate it. Smiles, Carol

reply by Kathryn Varuzza on 28-Mar-2010
    You're welcome Carol.
    Kathryn
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Oatmeal
 
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Excellent tale. I wish you the best in the contest. The story line flowed well. The theme was nice.

There was no SPAG. No room for improvement.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal


 Comment Written 27-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
    Oatmeal,

    Thank you so much for the kind comments. I truly appreciate it. Smiles Carol
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blind poet - I have a feeling this story is going to win. It has the pathos, the touching situation, a forlorn mother and a hint of faith. Nicely done.
Charlie


 Comment Written 27-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
    Charlie,

    Thank you so much for having confidence in my story. I appreciate all the good thoughts. Carol

reply by chaswriter on 28-Mar-2010
    Carol - Congratulations. I thought you had a winner.
Comment by
Kashif Ali Abbas
 
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The contest rules of 100 words demanded a story with more communication in less words and you have done it successfully. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

best wishes in the contest

K


 Comment Written 27-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
    Kashif

    thanks for reading and enjoying the story.

    smiles, Carol
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I have done this same thing at my sisters grave, how emotional, and how well written with the character, your son, and the sadness is shown well in the words you use, good luck in the contest.,


 Comment Written 27-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
    Wierdgrace,

    I believe it is a special pleasing from above...we are so lucky to receive. Thank you...Carol
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cheyennewy
 
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Hi,

This is such a touching story. I have knelt beside my husband's grave and talked to him like the woman in your story. Somehow it is very comforting and he has given me more than one sign that he hears me. Well done and good luck in the contest. Blessings....chey


 Comment Written 27-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
    Chey,

    Me too! I feel so blessed when it happens..Seems like it gives me strength to go on again. Thanks--Carol
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"Can't" is a word you cannot find in a strong person's dictionary. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Good luck in your contest.


 Comment Written 27-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
    Charlie

    My father etched that upon my mind and soul many many times...Thanks - Carol

reply by c_lucas on 28-Mar-2010
    You're welcome, Carol. Charlie
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AlvinTEthington
 
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Yes, sometimes when we are at our lowest, we receive that spark of divine inspiration and hope that allows us to continue on. Good celestial and terrestrial descriptions. Excellent juxtaposition of picture and story.


 Comment Written 27-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
    Alvin

    Our blessing come in many different ways as long as we are open to accepting them. Smiles, Carol

reply by AlvinTEthington on 28-Mar-2010
    Very true.
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vandawalker
 
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What inspirational writing! It's almost poetic. It's amazing that such a short story can have such an impacting theme. Good work.


 Comment Written 27-Mar-2010



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2010
    vandawalker

    Thank you so much for the wonderful comments. I truly appreciate them. Smiles, Carol
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