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I'm Sorry To Tell You This.....


The mind of a five year old.......

  43 total reviews 
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Sharesy
 
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This is precious! I just loved it. That is some smart five year old. This was a really cute piece. There were no spags. Teenage boys are pretty much the same the world over, when it comes to romance.


 Comment Written 25-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
    Sharesy,

    My little three year old grandaughter is going to be a quick one like the girl in this story..She always has a remark...out of the mouths of the innocent. Thanks! Carol
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RobinWrites
 
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What an adorable story. This is well written and left me with a smile. I think both answer to her questions we right on the mark. Great job.


 Comment Written 24-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
    Robin,

    Me too! I appreciate your enjoyment as well as the kind words. Thank you...Carol
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wow i really liked this alot it makes you think about the way the lord makes things the way he does.

good luck in the contest and anything else you may be creating here

good luck


 Comment Written 24-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
    mohintl

    Sorry for my late response. Life has been a little out of control the past few days...I appreciate your generous comments. CArol

reply by mohintl on 06-Jul-2010
    you are welcome
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Ann Smith
 
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The details and dialogue in the story are believeable and I can image being there listening in on the conversation. I can hear the relief from dad when Beth asked her question. It seemed easy at the time but you know how that can go. I like the humor and the quick wit of the waitress. Good luck with the contest. ann


 Comment Written 23-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
    Ann,

    Thank you so much for the kind comments. I apologize for my late response. Life got away from me. Smiles, CArol
Comment by
Gert sherwood
 
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Very good Carol, a wise and prefect answer to the question in the end of your dialogue contest poem.
I have to say that Mike is right on top of things and knows how to answer questions.
smiles


PS Just to let you know I won't be reviewing for a couple or more months. I have been told I must take a break and take care of my health.

Gert



 Comment Written 23-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
    Gert

    Please take care of yourself and stop back from time to time to let us know how you are doing.I hope that all goes well and you feel fine real soon. Take care and you shall always be in my thoughts and prayers...Smiles, Carol

reply by Gert sherwood on 24-Apr-2010
    Thank you so much Carol
    God Bless
    Gert
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amel
 
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A delightful little story to read, carol. The dialogs you crafted are awesome and made me smile, absorb me from the beginning to the end. I love the detail of you story. A smart dialog like this
'Why does God make girls so beautiful?"
Fabulous post.
Love, amel




 Comment Written 23-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
    amel,

    Thank you for your awesome response to my story. I apologize for my late thank you. LIfe is moving faster than this old lady can keep uyp I guess. Smiles, CArol

reply by amel on 28-Apr-2010
    YOu are most welcome, carol. I understand you are busy. Love, amel
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BlueJamme
 
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Hi there,

Another flawless and entertaining write you've got here. The characters are crafted well and believable in their actions. You also did well to set the scene with such a tight word count.

Well done!

BlueJamme


 Comment Written 23-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
    BlueJamme

    Thankyou for the kind and generous comemnts. Sorry for my late response..life is moving faster than this old lady can keep up. Smiles, CArol
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jadapenn
 
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Haha, even young Beth knows exactly what her stupid brother is up to. Shame, is Jimmy so transparent. I loved this contest entry. Full of fun and humour.
Well done, Smiles. Best wishes for the contest. luv jada


 Comment Written 23-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
    Jada,

    Glad you enjoyed the poke at the male species. Smiles to you, CArol
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MizKat
 
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I think your story is precious. I like the daddy's and little girl's conversation. I assume the waitress was the mother of the little girl and boy.


 Comment Written 23-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
    Kat,

    Apologize for my tardy response. Life is moving too fast for this old lady. I appreciate your time and comments. Smiles, Carol
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Nanny 6
 
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I'm chuckling as I'm writing this review. Kids say the cutest things in innocence. This is a funny little story and most enjoyable. Good luck... Judy


 Comment Written 23-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
    Judy,

    Thaqnk you so much for your kind comments. I apologize for my tardy response...life is moving far too fast for this old lady. Smiles, Carol
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