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The Candle Burns


In the heat of the flame.....

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RobinWrites
 
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This is a great kidnapping and loved the surprise anniversary present she received. Well written and had me wondering if it wasn't her husband, who knew her that well. Great job.


 Comment Written 06-May-2010



reply by the author on 11-May-2010
    Robin,

    Sorry it has taken me so long to respond. I truly appreciate your continued suppport and all your kindness. Carol
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jl & bandit
 
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Yeh, I saw this one comming... But it is still a very well written story.

Very well thought out, and fun...
I like the twist too.
You're done well with this pormpt, I wish you well in the contest.
JL&B


 Comment Written 29-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 06-May-2010
    jl & bandit

    My sincerest apologies for not being on the site to respond to your kind comments. Thank you so much. Carol
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Gert sherwood
 
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Hello Carol,
first thing I wish you loads of luck in the contest
You definitely had my full attention while reading your entry.
I loved the idea of let's say, reviving ones marriage
smiles
Gert


 Comment Written 29-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 06-May-2010
    Gert,

    Hope you are enjoying your rest...Take care and thank you for all the kind wishes. Carol
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IndianaIrish
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I enjoyed your kidnapping story so much, Carol. Very entertaining, and the ending has a delicious twist that made the story a treat.
Smiles,
Karyn :>)


 Comment Written 28-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
    Karyn,

    It was my anniversary the other day so I thought I should write my honey a story with a little spice from the good ole days...before we became old and decrepid. LOL Smiles, Carol
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this is a really good story -held my interest all the way to the end-which was a great surprise,good sensory description, i smiled at the fact you kept refering to the writer mode kicking in-good writting


 Comment Written 28-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
    suzzy,

    Thank you so much for your kind comments and for enjoying the story. Smiles, Carol
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Great story with just enough detail to keep the reader interested. I was pleased to see that although you realize where this story is headed at some point it was not to early to make reading the rest of it a chore. Well done.


 Comment Written 28-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
    franburn,

    Thank you for reading and sharing your comments. I appreciate the thoughts. Smiles, Carol
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sugardog
 
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Nice job! Carol, I enjoyed your creative approach to this sweet little kidnapping story. Yours had a happy ending! Interesting way to show his wife he didn't forget their anniversary...good thing she didn't freak out and do him any harm.

"I don't care if it's-You(you)didn't forget?"

Thanks for an entertaining read. Good luck. :) Dana


 Comment Written 28-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
    Dana,

    Thank you for your generous response to my story. I always appreciate when someone else enjoys my work. Smiles, Carol
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wierdgrace
 
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I truly loved the character you put into this story, I was locked into the words from the start, not looking for errors or revisions, well done, great twist as the contest requires, good luck.


 Comment Written 28-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
    wierdgrace,

    Thanks so much for reading and enjoying. I appreciate it so much.

    Smiles Carol
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Sandollar
 
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I loved this. I liked the twist, and a friendly kidnapping is usually the best kind, right? Your descriptions were spot on. I could sympathize when he walked out without kissing her goodbye. This story was very interesting and moved at the right pace. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for entering.
Only one little thing. Just close quotes.

My back arched as I greeted his touch. "Yeah, later.

Sandollar


 Comment Written 28-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
    Sandollar,

    Thank you so much for enjoying the story and sending me all your kind comments. I truly appreciate the time and thoughts.

    smiles, Carol
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Suzie B
 
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Some twist Carol! Yeehah...if only all writers block could be removed that way I'd deliberately develop it and then advertize.

Well written as always my friend and good luck in the contest.
Hugs
Suzie


 Comment Written 28-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2010
    Suzie,

    You and me both, girl friend. Not a bad way to spend the afternoon when you can't think of how to end a story, now is it? Smiles, Carol
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