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Soledadpaz
 
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Your poem paints a picture of undying love, never to be separated not even by heaven's door. It's a beautiful message and the art and color you chose, perfection.


 Comment Written 09-May-2010



reply by the author on 11-May-2010
    Soledadpaz,

    Thank you so much for enjoying my poetry. I truly appreciate the comments. Carol
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Vladilynn
 
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Ohhh...this is the enternity love, the promise to be forever. I was in love with this kind of soulmate love poem once...well, sometimes I still do. Lol

Thank you for sharing and good luck!

Love much
Lynn:0)


 Comment Written 01-May-2010



reply by the author on 06-May-2010
    Lynn,

    Ues, I lebieve most of us have been there at least once...memories are wonderful!

    Carol
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Sally Carter
 
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I am so behind in reviewing and answering pm's I am racing through the entries in this contest. So far this is the only one I have reviewed, which I hope speaks for itself.
A beautiful little poem, which really grabbed me. Such a gentle poem of quiet assurance, and so very moving. You will be getting my vote, mystery writer!
Best wishes. Sally


 Comment Written 01-May-2010



reply by the author on 06-May-2010
    Sally,

    Thanks for lifting my spirits and sending me so many good vibes. I really appreciate it. Smiles, Carol
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Mrs Happy Poet
 
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Yes I liked this you have expressed your thoughts well with feeling reminding the readers that true love never dies good luck regards Fuller


 Comment Written 01-May-2010



reply by the author on 06-May-2010
    Fuller,


    Thank you for all the encouragement. I really appreciate it. I haven't been able to spend much time lately on the site, and I always appreciate hearing from you. I apologize for taking so long to get back to you. Smiles, Carol
Comment by
rama devi
May All Beings Be Happy
 
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Good theme and angle of approach to this contest. Imaginative and spiritual. Well phrased and nicely presented with lovely artwork.

Good luck!

Warmly, rd


 Comment Written 01-May-2010



reply by the author on 06-May-2010
    rd


    Thank you for all the encouragement. I really appreciate it. I haven't been able to spend much time lately on the site, and I always appreciate hearing from you. I apologize for taking so long to get back to you. Smiles, Carol

reply by rama devi on 06-May-2010
    Thanks Carol@ Noticed your absence. Hope all is okay? Nice to see you again. LOVE, rd

reply by the author on 06-May-2010
    rd,

    Can't stay long so I got up very early this morning to try and at least thank some people who are so generous to read my writing. Life throws a few curves sometimes.
    Smiles, Carol

reply by rama devi on 06-May-2010
    HOpe you are riding the curves gracefully and please do not let things be a burden---everything is a blessing in disguise, even the most painful moments of crisis and change.

    thanks for counting me as one of the generous ones! :) YAY!

    HUGS, rd
Comment by
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Judian James
 
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Oh, this was a tear jerker. It's frightening to all of us to consider we may be the one left behind, and yet, we hate to desert our beloved. Poignant little piece.


 Comment Written 01-May-2010



reply by the author on 06-May-2010
    Jude,


    Thank you for all the encouragement. I really appreciate it. I haven't been able to spend much time lately on the site, and I always appreciate hearing from you. I apologize for taking so long to get back to you. Smiles, Carol
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This had me thinking of someone being on their last breath and seeking out the one they needed most. When you said: "Kiss me, whisper I love you. Isn't that what we all want?


 Comment Written 30-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 06-May-2010
    Micastruth


    Thank you for all the encouragement. I really appreciate it. I haven't been able to spend much time lately on the site, and I always appreciate hearing from you. I apologize for taking so long to get back to you. Smiles, Carol
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evela
 
 
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This is good! This is really good!

My only thing is the words; if the lover is gone, wouldn't he/she then wait for you to come join?

I don't know! But, still, a great piece!!

Take care!!


 Comment Written 30-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 06-May-2010
    evela,


    Thank you for all the encouragement. I really appreciate it. I haven't been able to spend much time lately on the site, and I always appreciate hearing from you. I apologize for taking so long to get back to you. Smiles, Carol
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Nicki_Mist
 
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This is so lovely. A promise of a kiss and I love you and to be waiting for the person at heavens door. Wow! You expressed this so wonderful and with passion. Great poem.
Nicole


 Comment Written 30-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 06-May-2010
    Nicole,


    Thank you for all the encouragement. I really appreciate it. I haven't been able to spend much time lately on the site, and I always appreciate hearing from you. I apologize for taking so long to get back to you. Smiles, Carol
Comment by
LateBloomer
Free Verse is free flow from the heart
~ Till we meet in print ~
 
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Hello author,

A most heart-felt love poem. This poem illustrates the love of a lifetime shared by two. In our final hour, who else would we want to share it with, except our most beloved.

Good luck in the contest. Regards, LateBloomer


 Comment Written 30-Apr-2010



reply by the author on 06-May-2010
    LateBloomer,


    Thank you for all the encouragement. I really appreciate it. I haven't been able to spend much time lately on the site, and I always appreciate hearing from you. I apologize for taking so long to get back to you. Smiles, Carol
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