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Wings...

  3 total reviews 
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Eternal Muse
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Dearest Ronni,

Another magnificent tribute, which held me quite humbled and close to tears. Yes, I know and love this song by Better Midler (one of my favorite artists); and I am so happy my works and particularly, sonnets, inspire you so. I find a sonnet form extremely stimulating. It has been this way for centuries; at Shakespearean era and long before him, sonnets held a particular fascination over the minds and hearts. Of course, we don't write in Shakespearean language anymore; times have changed; but still, a sonnet reigns!

I am so glad I could contribute, even somewhat, so someone's spiritual contentment; and if my works grow wings, I have done something right in this world.

Thank you from the bottom of my heart for this tribute extraordinnaire. I will hold it in my heart, always,


Love and blessings,


Yelena


 Comment Written 21-May-2010



reply by the author on 21-May-2010
    Dearest Yelena,
    You have done something quite right indeed; with your superb
    talent and your gift for inspiring spiritually and personally.
    We are all here, after all to do the best we can with our
    God-given talents and skills and be caring and helpful human
    beings; it doesn't all come from church or a pulpit; sometimes
    it is up to us individually to do our part to help one another.
    I am sure many of your readers and fans have had the same
    effects from your sonnets and their messages; even if they
    can't word it as elaborately as they may wish they could.
    I admire your dicipline for the Sonnet form; you truly have
    it mastered, and each one is a gem and treausure of insight.
    I am happy you were pleased with the tribute; and thank you
    for expressing your gracious appreciation of it. It has been
    quite an experience with you here on FS; a most delightful and
    totally incomparable one. I am blessed by your continued
    generosity and kindness, and deeply appreciated.
    Love & Million Hugs!
    Ronni
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Kashif Ali Abbas
 
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This is a lovely poem, i liked the range of ideas and high class poetry.

"Fly...fly...fly...away
you let me fly so high
fly...fly...fly...
so high against the sky,
[ Such flow and sweet repetition]

K


 Comment Written 21-May-2010



reply by the author on 21-May-2010
    Thank you for your kind and thoughtful review, and for
    stopping by to read. So glad you liked it. Best wishes.
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chocoletdrop052
 
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I love your poem very much. It is a blessing to be free to
give praise to the Lord our God. May the cradle you in his arms and bless you with all you seek. Stay blessed


 Comment Written 21-May-2010



reply by the author on 21-May-2010
    Thank you for your uplifting review. I am so pleased you
    liked it and stopped to read and offer your kind thoughts
    and comments. Thank you for your blessings; be blessed too
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