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If Not Together, Then Why?


When Only A Miracle Will Do.....

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Turtle... who?
 
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I read this short, and thought about a horrible story that sort of follows the point. But this story was good, easy to read and follow.

At work, a coworker's wife had heart surgery, which turned out well, so that's good, but he told me that someone in the ward had heart surgery, maybe a heart attack, and he was recovering, but his dog died while he was away. Like the dog knew he had a heart attack, but didn't know he survived, and starved itself to death.

The doctors told them not to tell him his dog died.


 Comment Written 14-Jun-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
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Kingsland
 
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this was a really well written piece of poetry. I found it to work on two levels. One in medicine and the other on a romantic avenue. This was just a delightful piece of poetic verse to have read and written a review for... John


 Comment Written 10-Jun-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
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RebelRose
 
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Very well done. I never realized that there were so many ways you could a whole poem or story and not use the letter "S". You did a great job.


 Comment Written 10-Jun-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    Patti,

    Thank you...Carol
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sgalletti
 
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I'm pleased you found something to heal your heart! This is prosaic in its presentation...free verse for sure. Best of luck in the contest. Sue


 Comment Written 08-Jun-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
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Deejharrington
 
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The best of luck in the contest. You did a terrific job with such restrictions. You established the characters with so few sentences. But the emotions were loud and clear.
dj


 Comment Written 08-Jun-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol

reply by Deejharrington on 02-Jul-2010
    you're welcome
    dj

reply by Deejharrington on 02-Jul-2010
    you're welcome
    dj
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MizKat
 
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I love it. You told a very nice story without using one S. I find this very difficult to do. I really enjoyed this and wish you well in the contest. Kat


 Comment Written 08-Jun-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
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Carol D Parker
 
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Your poem is so true. Love can conquer anything.
I like the way you told a complete story with so
few word. You show who, what, when, where and why.
This is excellent. The writing is too. Best of
luck in the comp.


 Comment Written 08-Jun-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
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wierdgrace
 
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what a great writing story for this contest, and the diolouge and the story with the characters, brought the picture to the readers, hope you get many votes, I will watch for it.


 Comment Written 08-Jun-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol

reply by wierdgrace on 02-Jul-2010
    this is the best
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Bellringer
 
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Very good. You met the challenge requirements and gave us a quick romance story. Best wishes in the contest. This one is a contender.


 Comment Written 08-Jun-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
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anne1204
 
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Creative approach to this contest. It is hard to write a story with so few words and not use an S. You did a great job. Good Luck in contest. Anne 1204


 Comment Written 08-Jun-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
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