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Knowing the right thing to do....

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marcii
 
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Wow what a story, you can picture this scene so easily from you good descriptions.
A sad story that had a lot in it, each different scene changed ones emotions.
This is really good.
Best of luck in contest
Marcii


 Comment Written 14-Jun-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
Comment by
samandlancelot
Patricia
 
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I wonder if her mom survived. You told your story well through the eyes of the child. Well done. Great contender for the contest.

Patricia


 Comment Written 14-Jun-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
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RebelRose
 
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Very cute story and well written. I think everyone should teach their children how to dial 911 in the event of an emergency. There have been many kids who have saved lives by that knowledge.


 Comment Written 14-Jun-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    Patti,

    Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol

reply by RebelRose on 05-Jul-2010
    I have been on vacation and just read this reply. I don't know exactly what you meant by "life is not being kind of late" but whatever it is, I surely hope it gets better and gets worked out.
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Shirley B
 
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What a sad story, but very well told in the voice of a child. I could feel the child's fear of the storm and also the fear that she was going to be in trouble for opening the door to strangers. These things all made your story very believable. Good luck in the contest, Shirley


 Comment Written 14-Jun-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    Shirley,

    Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol

reply by Shirley B on 02-Jul-2010
    Dear Carol, I hope life gets better for you soon, Shirley
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Isaiah Ramesses
 
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This is a pretty good entry. Nice dialogue and narration. Imagery works well. There is something about the story that is missing, and I can't put my finger on it. So...
Good job.

Isaiah Ramesses


 Comment Written 14-Jun-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
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Jnetgame
 
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Excellent story. The pace of this was just right and I could picture Jamie and her teddy bear struggling to ge through this crisis. Good luck.

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 Comment Written 14-Jun-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
Comment by
IndianaIrish
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Great story for this contest. You had me scared and I love storms! LOL. Well written through the eyes of a child. Best of luck in the contest!
Indy :>)

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 Comment Written 14-Jun-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    Indy...

    Thank you...Carol
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