A Broken Heart Won't Kill Ya
[Meant to be sung, folks - not precise meter...]
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Evil in Paradise - Part 7


Mystery and Crime

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adewpearl
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rear it's ugly head - drop the apostrophe
Carol, I always had suspicions about James - boy, is this an important chapter - while we don't know the whole story yet, we sure learned a whole lot of what is going on - and what a gruesome story it is. The younger brother is a bit like Of Mice and Men only so much more sinister. Carrie sure is in a bad spot. Great use of dialogue to work in the back story. Brooke


 Comment Written 26-Jun-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    Brooke,

    My apologies for my delay in thanking you for all your continued support and for enjoying the story. I appreciate every encouraging comment.

    Another of those unexpected "life happens" has knocked at my door claiming much of my time...I apologize for my delay in thanking you and in writing. I certainly didn't plan on the story being so long, but it took on a life of its own as well. Hopefully, I can see a light at the end of the tunnel for both.

    Smiles....Carol
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My, my my Ths is something that got me going again, I'm glad they didn't kill the young lady, then again there's one guy I'm not to sure he's tied to tight.
this is a good wrire.

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 Comment Written 26-Jun-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    Cookie,

    I need your prayers again...Life is dropping buckets of Yuck on me...

    Thanks for your support..Carol

reply by misscookie on 02-Jul-2010
    You are always in my prayers my friend. Remember after the rain a rainbow appeares.

reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    But I can't get it to stop storming...Smiles, Carol

reply by misscookie on 02-Jul-2010
    Carol I know it's easy to say, but you know. We can trust our all- Knowning God for the unknown future.
    After all everything is in His plans. And all these thing I have been telling myself for the pass few weeks also. So I'm practcing what I preach. (smile )
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Ah, a gruesome twist. Now we have to get Darryl on his white stead to do the heroic works. This was a good chapter, Smiles. I thoroughly enjoyed the suspense and tension. This baby brother is a monster.
Well done. luv jada

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 Comment Written 26-Jun-2010



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    Jada,

    Sorry for my delay...I just can't seem to get passed this black cloud...Smiles, Carol
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