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Evil in Paradise - Part 9


Mystery and Crime

  25 total reviews 
Comment by
shygirl21
 
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oooh - I'd forgot how captivating this story is! I found myself leaning closer and closer to the monitor lol. You've got fab descriptions and definitely have a talent when it comes to putting your readers on edge!

Pamela x


 Comment Written 25-Aug-2010



reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
    Pamela,

    Thanks jfor all the encouragement...I truly appreciate it..Carol
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Several nice twists to this story and I've found myself wondering aloud about several of the situations. This story went in a direction I'd didn't expect and I love when a story does that. A nicely written. exciting chapter.


 Comment Written 13-Jul-2010



reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
    I appreciate your continued readership and support, Carol
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L.lora
 
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Most excellent, well thought
out and presented. What a rush,
your high tension packed easy
flowing write with colorful
descriptions guides your reader
smoothly through first line to
last. Exciting, looking forward
to your next post. no nits or spags
Lora


 Comment Written 10-Jul-2010



reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
    Thanks so much...Carol
Comment by
hotstuff
 
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An action packed chapter. It kept me on my toes. The suspense is gripping. I hope they get to Carrie in time, I can't bear to think of what could be her fate.


 Comment Written 10-Jul-2010



reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
    Thanks for sticking with the story. I appreciate the loyalty. Carol
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IndianaIrish
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OH CAROL!!!! I so didn't want this to end yet. You sure know how to grab the reader and make them to beg for more. Excellent tension and story-telling, my friend!
Indy :>)


 Comment Written 08-Jul-2010



reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
    Indy,

    My apologies for being so late in sending you my thanks...Carol
Comment by
Trybuck
 
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Exceptional
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Danger on every side
Action packed high and wide
Hope they find Carrie alive and well
So she can bid James a final farewell

Well done, Buck


 Comment Written 08-Jul-2010



reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
    Buck,

    Life is throwing me real hard balls so I apologize for my tardiness in thanking you for the wonderful thoughts and stars. Carol
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This is my favorite chapter yet! I like the atmosphere you have created with the moonshine, this is one of my favorite subjects...these characters glow with realism. Very suspenseful Carol...can't wait to see how this comes out!! ") Luv, Susan


 Comment Written 08-Jul-2010



reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
    Susan,

    Life is throwing me real hard balls so I apologize for my tardiness in thanking you for the wonderful thoughts and stars. Carol

reply by Realist101 on 21-Jul-2010
    Me too, I feel my life is over. The harassment continues now with my son arrested...it is small town vengence at it's "best"...I hope things will improve for you...hang in there...Luv, Susan

reply by the author on 21-Jul-2010
    Oh Susan, I am so sorry that people can't just let you live your life without so much pain. I didn't know about your son. That must be driving you insane. My thoughts and prayers are with you always. Smiles, Carol
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I really enjoyed this chapter. Now you have the reader wondering who killed Mick. I like how you've eliminated all of the character who we've met so far. Very mysterious. A great read.


 Comment Written 08-Jul-2010



reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
    Life is throwing me real hard balls so I apologize for my tardiness in thanking you for the wonderful thoughts and stars. Carol

reply by ladybird on 19-Jul-2010
    You're welcome.
Comment by
jadapenn
 
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We're getting really hot in this chapter. Good action and tension throughout. I hope Carrie is still okay and that young imbecile doesn't get it into his stupid mind to go and molest and kill her.
Well done. luv jada


 Comment Written 08-Jul-2010



reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
    Life is throwing me real hard balls so I apologize for my tardiness in thanking you for the wonderful thoughts and stars. Carol
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fionageorge
 
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Will she? I hope so.
Hi Carol, nice to see more of your writings again, my friend. Especially since it is always well written and an interesting read. I enjoyed this part, and again, your use of dialogue is really good, as is your ability to bright scenarios to life, drawing the reader in.
Warmest regards, Marijke


 Comment Written 08-Jul-2010



reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
    Life is throwing me real hard balls so I apologize for my tardiness in thanking you for the wonderful thoughts and stars. Carol

reply by fionageorge on 18-Jul-2010
    Please, never apologise, Carol. Trust me, there are much more important things to deal with in life than to respond to my review.
    I hope you learn to let those real hard balls bounce hard, and not stick. Treat them as sticky notes, to take note, but to deal with, and then to discard.
    I know that sounds simplistic, and I am sure you are dealing with some difficult and painful issues. Please do not let them get on top of you, you are too good a person. Keep writing (you are brilliant!) and stay positive. Things will get better. If you ever want to talk, I'm a good listener. I am often on Skype, and happy to listen.
    Let me know.
    Love,
    Marijke
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