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My Gain Your Loss - An Accident?

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Carol, I like it. One thing I've learned since I've been with Fanstory is that it doesn't have to be long to be good or fun. I'm gettng more enamored with Flash Fiction. Maybe it's because I don't like to waste words.

I love the "well hidden" dog pic. He even looks devious, doesn't he.

Well done, as usual. Always love your posts, pat


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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
    Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
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Hullo Carol ...

This is sure to bring a smile to all of your readers and, after all, who could blame the Dog if the aroma was so tempting?
Thank you for sharing this with us and, as it is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
Love from .. Nanette Mary.


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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
    Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
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I was beginning to wonder where the conflict was going to come from since the sisters were being so chummy and helpful to each other despite each one's desire to win the contest, and then the hungry dog entered the picture. LOL I guess he resolved any problem as to which one would win. ;-) This is funny, Carol. Good twist ending. Brooke


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    Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
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Hi Carol,

As I began to read this I was afraid the dog would find a feast! A humorous and fun story...glad you are back. Blessings, chey


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    Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
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I love the photo
It tells it all
I love the short story, I think it is not only funny and light I think children would love it too.
Some thing like this happen with our family dog, but i just can't remember what she got.
this is a good write.


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    Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol

reply by misscookie on 19-Jul-2010
    I love everything you write and you are welcopme.
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Sounds like a devious dog or a hungry man in disguise
Poor girls seem to have lost their award winning pies

Are there never any happy ending stories anymore?
Well done, Buck


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    Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
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This was a priceless essay of opportunity seized. There is always someone slinking around with a growling stomach and any chance is grabbed. Shame so one twin lost out while Buster crawled in under a bush and went to sleep. You brought a smile to my face.
Well done. luv jada


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    Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
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I enjoyed this microfiction story. That certain was devious of Karrie to leave the door ajar. I did notice one extra ? in this sentence:
"I'll help you clear a space in the car for them?"
Thanks for sharing this.


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    Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
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As a mother of boys, it wouldn't have to be a canine intruder. Whatever I am baking, never has a chance to cool before it's devoured. Although, have two large dogs, a black lab and a great pyrenees, that are capable of devouring food also. I enjoyed your flas fiction story.


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    Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
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Bad, bad sister!. Smart, smart, sister.

I admire those of you who can tell a story in 6 words (LOL) OK, a few more than that, but you do make each word count.


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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
    Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
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