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My Gain Your Loss - An Accident?

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Gideon Roth
 
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Hi there. With just 105 words you managed to convey the best mental picture of an event that many of us dog lovers have endured from time to time. Well done on this and I will look for your future submissions...Tim, aka, Gideon


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2010



reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
    Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
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Ann Smith
 
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Oh my how devious. I believe if you had entered the contest this might would have won. This story not only is devious, but sneaky. The details are good, and I can smell the pies. As always there's not a wasted word. ann


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2010



reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
    Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
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Gert sherwood
 
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Hello Begin, and
'Goodbye' to those delicious pies what a great closure to your hilarious prompt.

The hungry canine seized his opportunity. Dinner was waiting.
Gert




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 Comment Written 18-Jul-2010



reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
    Gert,
    Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
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c_lucas
 
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The hungry canine will end of with its throat's cuts. This is very well written with very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good job.

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 Comment Written 18-Jul-2010



reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
    Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol

reply by c_lucas on 18-Jul-2010
    You're welcome, Carol. Chralie
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