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You mentioned in one of your reviews that your time had been held captive by one nightmare after another. I'm glad you wee convinced to write about it, Carol! This was captivating from the start and I look forward to part 2!
Indy :>)


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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
    Karyn,

    And I only skimmed the surface....But I think there is a small light glimmering at the end of the tunnel..Smiles, Carol
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Wow that's some being I can't wait to hear the rest. I may be wrong but I believe people who have no respect for others property have no respect for themselves.


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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2010
    C ookie,

    My life has really been a mess and yes I was totally broken hearted when I finally saw my house...It gets worse though. Hope you read part two...so you know what I have been up to lately. Smiles, Carol

reply by misscookie on 15-Aug-2010
    I did and I truly feel for you but can't reach you. Why do people always say I will help you and don't. or half Ass it. It would be better If the didn't offer to help period. it just makesdouble work for you i know I'm going through the same thing well not as bad as you.
    God will give you the strenght and things will turn out allright. Just don't try to do everything at once.

reply by misscookie on 15-Aug-2010
    I did and I truly feel for you but can't reach you. Why do people always say I will help you and don't. or half Ass it. It would be better If the didn't offer to help period. it just makesdouble work for you i know I'm going through the same thing well not as bad as you.
    God will give you the strenght and things will turn out allright. Just don't try to do everything at once.
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Sorry to hear that, Carol. I was wondering where you were. I thought, perhaps you were enjoying a long vacation, wow, was I wrong.

Your story is heartbreaking to read. It's hard to think family would destroy your house, but I know it happens. All that, on top of your significant other having such terrible health problems.

And it sounds like the nightmare gets worse. I hope writing it out acts as some form of therapy for you through all this, otherwise uncork a bottle of wine and relax with a few glasses. - John


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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2010
    John,

    Thanks for stopping by and reading the first chapter...I really would like to have that glass of wine... maybe share it with a fellow writer as we commiserate. Hope you read the last chapter too..Life does continue to drop more bombs at my door step. Smiles, Carol
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Carol, it is wonderful to read a piece by you but sad that your true story is filled with so many details of things gone tragically wrong. Each obstacle you have had to overcome is presented with vivid detail, clarity and passion - I love your narrative voice. Now I'm going to read part two. Brooke :-)


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    Brooke,

    Thank you for the wonderful response. I truly appreciate hearing from you...I miss having the time to read your poems...they always lift my spirits. Smiles, Carol
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Wow,they say that when it rains it pours and in this case that's for sure. My heart goes out to you. It seems as if you are fighting very hard.

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    Rkagan,

    Thanks for the wondeful thoughts. I hope you continue reading part two...life really got crazy! Smiles, Carol
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Hi Carol,

How many disasters can one person live through? I am so sorry for you troubles and the thoughts of that beautiful home being destroyed is almost to painful to bear. As usual you have written this piece very well with excellent imagery. Hope all is better soon. Blessings, chey

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2010
    Chey,

    I don't have the answers to that questions. If you continue reading the second part you will see what I mean. Thanks for the kind words...Smiles, Carol
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