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I Was Told But....


Too much right is too much!

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Joan E.
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Oh, my, that is quite an unexpected zinger of a finale and wake-up call for the new groom! The picture you chose says it all!! Thanks for the fun read. -Joan


 Comment Written 20-Aug-2010



reply by the author on 20-Aug-2010
    Thank you Joan for your fun review, glad you enjoyed. Just
    one of those fun things to remember about dear ol' mom, when
    you finally have the sense of humor to appreciate it. Thanks
    again for dropping by to read. Best wishes.
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Ronni,

What a RUDE awakening! Too late?? Your artwork choice is just perfect! I seem to be still be exclaiming that same thing, but I am in almost TOTAL denial:)

This is a very spry amusing poem.

Linda


 Comment Written 19-Aug-2010



reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
    Thank you dear Linda, for fun review. It was just a fun joke..
    with some ironic reality to it besides the humor. Glad you
    enjoyed. Take care, God Bless!

reply by AnnaLinda on 19-Aug-2010
    Ronni,

    I MUST send you a personal email. Can you help me?

    Linda

reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
    Of course dear, please do. You have always
    been welcome to do so! Love, Ronni

reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
    Of course dear, please do. You have always
    been welcome to do so! Love, Ronni
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Hi, ronni. Long time no hear from ?? I like the humor here. One can read into it anything they might want to imagine, I guess. Good to see you again....Bob


 Comment Written 18-Aug-2010



reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
    Thank you Bob, for the thoughtful reveiw. Just having some
    fun. Yes, it is very much 'open to interpretation' on this
    one...LOL. Don't see enough of you either...thanks for
    dropping by. Take care, best wishes!
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Fine poem with good humor. I enjoyed reading it. BTW I thought she would have said OMG several times the night before. Perhaps the groom was happy to hear it at least in the morning. Your humorous poem was a welcome relief in this site.


 Comment Written 17-Aug-2010



reply by the author on 17-Aug-2010
    Thank you Ramarao, for your upbeat review, sincerely
    appreciated it. You're right, she likely would have said
    OMG several times the night before...good point to rememeber...
    thanks for sharing your interesting thougths and comments.
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Hi Ronni, I love this cute and funny poem with a great illustration too! The expression on her face and your last line are perfect in projecting your message! Does that really happen? LOL I enjoyed the read very much. All the best, Warren


 Comment Written 17-Aug-2010



reply by the author on 17-Aug-2010
    Thank you Warren, for the uplifting review. So glad you enjoyed
    it and stopped to offer your thoughts and comments too. Does
    this really happen? Oh yes...but always with a senso of humor
    to go with it! Thank you again for the visit.
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this is cute. it made me smile, especially the picture. it reminds me of a card i bought for my friend. she laughed so hard and she was wearing rollers when i gave it to her.


 Comment Written 17-Aug-2010



reply by the author on 17-Aug-2010
    Thank you for the neat review, so glad you liked it. I imagine
    that was quite a fun memory to still remember; thanks for
    sharing it. Have a great day.
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Cute! I love the way you start off with the couple being VERY HAPPY, but at the end the wife WOEFULLY EXCLAIMS. Quite a transition there, although the groom is still ELATED. The, the bride's final comment is priceless. We don't know exactly what her mother told her, but obviously it was more than one thing in light of that word EVERYTHING. One little typo: FANTSTIC should be FANTASTIC.


 Comment Written 17-Aug-2010



reply by the author on 17-Aug-2010
    Thank you bowls for the great review. Sincerely appreciated.
    And thanks for spelling tip....will fix right away. Have
    a great day!
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Is it just me? I don't get it! I've just read a joke with no punch line? The picture is the funniest thing here. Left me wondering WHAT Mother was right about? Now if HE had awakened, and saw the (above picture)..lol- then I could understand HIM making that final comment. But, I still want to know what mother was 'right' about? Betty

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 Comment Written 17-Aug-2010



reply by the author on 17-Aug-2010
    Betty, sorry you missed the point and the joke. Might be
    that you found it too brief and expected more to it; and
    sorry to disappoint you. What the mother was'right' about is
    open to interpretation...part of the punch line and point of
    the joke. Again, sorry for the frustration and disappointment
    with it. But I do apppreciate your very candid comments and
    thoughts on it. Have a great day.

reply by seewhatimwritingnow on 17-Aug-2010
    Well.. first I thought "Sex"? (what mother was 'right' about. Then said, "No, apparently she'd had a great honeymoon night, since she went to sleep, apparently peacefully. Maybe she just awakened being a 'Gripping Nag'? LOL Starting out her first day of marriage with "Mother was RIGHT!"- ?? Just didn't know what 'Mother was right' about? Sorry to be critical on this one- and it appears that I'm the only one- So the fault probably lays with my own lack of a sense of humor. Thanks, Betty

reply by the author on 17-Aug-2010
    Still, you were right to make your point
    and disappointments known, and is a learning
    process here, which you candidly provided,
    and I respect that, and you for it. Actually
    the punch line was meant to remember all
    the things 'mother told us about 'sex'...
    you may remember some horror things like
    mothers told their daughters about sex.
    You owe me no apologies dear, you had every
    right to challenge me on what you did not
    find clear or compelling. Again, I admire
    and respect your for that all the more.
    Have a great day friend!
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Thesis
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Lol. Very cute, Ronni. Her mother must have been quite a wise lady, if she was right about everything.

I enjoyed your humor. - John


 Comment Written 17-Aug-2010



reply by the author on 17-Aug-2010
    Thank you John, glad you enjoyed, and so appreciate your
    supportive review. Have a great day.
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How cute. Your short story had great imagery and the picture was priceless! thanks for making my day start out with a laugh. Shirley


 Comment Written 17-Aug-2010



reply by the author on 17-Aug-2010
    Thanks Shirley, for the uplifting review. So glad you
    enjoyed, and loved your thoughts and comments too. Have
    great, fun day.
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