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Knights in Satin


When women pick up the gauntlet....

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This short story speaks volumes. I was able to imagine the battle from the short descriptions your provided. Amazing! This is something I'm am eager to learn.


 Comment Written 25-Aug-2010



reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
    Robin,

    Been away from the site for so long and miss you and all my friends. Thank you for enjoying my work and I hope to be back soon. I truly miss the pleasure. Smiles, Carol
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Wow,excellent piece of flash ficition Begin Again, I found no spags whatsoever and was kept interested from the beginning, excellent job, keep writing!!


 Comment Written 24-Aug-2010



reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
    Jake,

    Been away from the site for so long and miss you and all my friends. Thank you for enjoying my work and I hope to be back soon. I truly miss the pleasure. Smiles, Carol
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Hi Carol, another wonderfully worded, minimum words, maximu effect, micro fiction, or flash fiction. Yes, if women pick up the gauntlet ... anything can happen. I enjoyed this short story, told in your inimitable style.
Warmest regards and hugs, Marijke


 Comment Written 23-Aug-2010



reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
    Marijke,

    Been away from the site for so long and miss you and all my friends. Thank you for enjoying my work and I hope to be back soon. I truly miss the pleasure. Smiles, Carol
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I always wonder when the battles are over, if the people who lost so much think that it was worth it in the end for the ones in power. great job.


 Comment Written 22-Aug-2010



reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
    Joy,

    My apologies for saying thank you so late..Carol
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Violence again here. In such brief space, you've skillfully depicted ravages of war. I think you've dealt especially well regarding how women suffer in armed conflicts. I interpret the torn dresses and blood-stained garments as savage rapes that often accompany wars.

In the other side of the conflict are the praises to the conquerors from the Princess. This is a political tact that also accompanies armed conflicts. l
Just the same, the tragedies of war remain.


 Comment Written 22-Aug-2010



reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
    stumbly,

    Thank you so much for reading and enjoying...Smiles, Carol
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You're going great guns with your shorts, sweetness. I felt all the action of battle in this piece. You portrayed the strength and fear of the human. Well written with a good message in such a short essay. luv jada


 Comment Written 22-Aug-2010



reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
    JADA,

    A belated but deeply felt thank you...Smiles, Carol
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Hi Carol, This one is good. I enjoyed it. It really could be set in time future or past. In any case it shows the strength of people willing to prevail despite overwhelming odds. Warm regards, Donna


 Comment Written 22-Aug-2010



reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
    Donna,

    Life still has me in a strangle hold but I hope to be back soon. Thank you for enjoying my work and the continued encouragement. Smiles, CArol
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This is gread flash fiction. It is good to know you are finding time to write again. A virus fried my computer yesterday so I don't know when I'll get another chance to review or write. Hope your lucks improved. Aparently mine hasn't.
Beth


 Comment Written 22-Aug-2010



reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
    Beth,

    Life still has me in a strangle hold but I hope to be back soon. Thank you for enjoying my work and the continued encouragement. Smiles, CArol
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Hi Carol! THis is different! I really enjoyed this, just wish it were a longer one! It would be so interesting to know more about women knights? But this is excellent, perfectly done micro flash!! ") Love , Susan


 Comment Written 21-Aug-2010



reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
    Susan,

    Had to give those women their proper kudos...thank you. Smiles, CArol
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Hi Carol! Ah, the power of united women! :>)

I enjoyed your story and hope you have written another story for the flash fiction contest, because this is a good one!
Smiles,
Indy :>)


 Comment Written 21-Aug-2010



reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
    Indy,

    Lately all the time I have to spend on the site is short and quick so the flash fiction tends to sooth my cravings for the moment. Glad that you enjoyed it. Smiles, Carol
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