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If only I could tell you ......

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Jnetgame
 
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Wow! This definitely earns a 6 star rating from me. You wrote this with such emotion and heart. It was both sad and inspirational. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 18-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    Jnetgame,

    Awesome and sincerely appreciated...Carol
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M. Karol
 
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What a biography and how well it is told! The summary of life lived with courage and strength and then having the ability to forgive.
Strength of character. But I still hoped the father would realize or hoped she would stop bothering but then she is a great woman.
Best
Madhvi


 Comment Written 18-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    M. Karol

    Awesome review and sincerely appreciated. Smiles, Carol
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Writeaway...
 
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Bravo Begin Again - nice to see you back on track again. I thorughly enjoyed this piece and was kept interested from the beginning, hope to see more from you soon, keep writing!! :)


 Comment Written 18-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    Jake,

    Thanks for the kindness, encouragement and support. I truly appreciated the kind words. Smiles, Carol
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Trybuck
 
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If I only knew then what I know now, how different life might be.
Well done with your whispers to a child. We have to believe in ourselves regardless if anyone else does or not.

Maybe it's not too late for us all to Begin Again, Buck


 Comment Written 18-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    Buck,

    I always appreciate your support and knowing I have a friend to lean on once in awhile. Thank you...Carol
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sweetwoodjax
 
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this is very well written with good form and good flow, a great job writing about the pain you are talking this girl through, knowing what will happen and trying to prepare her for it. good luck in the contest


 Comment Written 18-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    sweetwoodjax,

    Thank you for your encouragement, support and kindness....Carol
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Realist101
 
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Some of this I could be telling myself. This really is a powerful piece of writing. Deep seated anger, yet hope rises from this, but it is hard, very hard to make lemonade sometimes...I hope you do...please know, you are not alone in these feelings. "/ Susan


 Comment Written 18-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    Susan,

    I know we share a lot of the same emotions and trials..I hope you are doing better. Your kind words were so helpful. Smiles, Carol

reply by Realist101 on 23-Oct-2010
    You too Carol. I'm having some health issues, probably resulting from stress. Try to NOT worry so, Carol, it will literally make you ill. Luv, Susan
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Hi, Author, this is a wonderful write containing your advice to the little girl you are. Isn't it sad that a girl will always be be girl in the eyes of the father, and the situation has not changed even now. My heart goes for you.


 Comment Written 17-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    Belinda,

    Thank you for your kindness and support. Thinking you know what your father thins of you is one thing...having him actually voice it was a blow....but I surprised myself in the fact that I can recover from this stumbling block as well. Appreciate the kind words...Carol
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this is so well written and touching, made me teary eyed thinking of my own daughter. you have really grasped the essence of these whispers. Thank you for sharing.


 Comment Written 17-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    Nic,

    Thank you for your kindness and support. I truly appreciate it. Carol
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BethShelby
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This is great writing from a stong woman and I'm pretty sure I know who you are. I think you put your signature in that last line. This is spicy and fun to read and really good advice. If I was that kid you're addressing I don't know if if I could handle all that good news. LOL I'm sure this will do well in the contest.


 Comment Written 17-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    Beth,

    My father's latest verbal abuse was something I'd thought my entire life but actually hearing him speak the words really stung. The surprising factor was that this contest appeared at the right time and I was able to dig deep inside and find that I can and will survive this blow as well. Thank you so much for the kindness. Smiles, CArol
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Wonderful piece. I feel inspired. I agree with you in that life can hand one some lemons but it is best to turn them to lemonade. Otherwise, one becomes bitter and perpetuates the ill will towards others. Maybe that is what happened to the "daddy" in your piece. It did have an autobiographical read to it. God bless you.


 Comment Written 17-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    quashdog,

    Yes, it was based on my life and feeling, but I discovered I can stand alone without his support and blessings...life does move forward. Thankyou for the support and encouragement. Smiles, Carol
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