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Believe in Your Tomorrows


If only I could tell you ......

  26 total reviews 
Comment by
jgirlie152
 
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Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
This is a story in which many grown women will recognize themselves. You have done an excellent job of going through the girl's life, her heartbreaks and her accomplishments. I have a feeling you know this girl or maybe you are her.
Having been the one girl in a family who doted on their boys I feel pride in this girl's strong constitution. Thank you for this painful but very good story.
Joan


 Comment Written 17-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    jgirlie,

    Awesome and greatly appreciated. Thank you...Carol
Comment by
Shirley McLain
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Poet Rating
  Rank:  49 (+2)
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  86 (+9)
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  Rank:  23
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  Rank:  42
 
Exceptional
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I would give you fifteen stars if I could. This was a wonderful piece of work as far as I am concerned. You shared the truth with every line and I for one appreciated it.


 Comment Written 17-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    Texasgal,

    Awesome...I can't tellyou how much I appreciate the kindness and support. Your words encourage me to stand up and move forward.

    Smiles, Carol
Comment by
marcii
 
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This is a very good story. I think we would like to all go back and tell our child self a thing or two.
I liked the way that you didn't tell the child-self to change anything but told her that she would have battles to fight though she would get through them and become a better person for it.
A really interesting story.
Good luck in the contest.
Marcii


 Comment Written 17-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    marcii,

    Thankyou for the kindness and support. I appreciate it very much. Smiles, Carol
Comment by
newbeginning
 
 
Exceptional
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What an insightful, thoughtful look at oneself! Beautifully written. I can tell you've gained so much wisdom through your experiences. Not only that, but you are able to express it. Love this story.


 Comment Written 17-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    newbeginning,

    Great name and idea...starting over when ones stumble is sometimes difficult but necessary..We can find a brighter future. Thanks so much. Smiles, Carol
Comment by
rivki1111
 
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Hi, the prompt did a good job of bringing out the writer in you (^_^)

I especially liked the way you finished, turning lemons into lemonade. The story is sad in places, but so is life.

A very appropriate whispering, cheers, rivki.

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 Comment Written 17-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    rivki,

    Thank you for the kind review and support. Carol
Comment by
essence56
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Good work and advice. However, it's alot for a young child to install, so you know we will repeat ourselves over and over before it sinks in. They learn through experience and consequences. Good work

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 Comment Written 17-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    essence,

    Thank you for the kind review and support. Carol
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