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The End or Not?


Left alone but maybe not.....

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kiwigirl2821
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An extraordinarily empowered piece of writing. Love how this one flowed and the compactness of the verse. Loved how the sadness grips you and impales the heart with sorrow. A well deserved win. Great job! xoxo Kiwi


 Comment Written 24-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 24-Oct-2010
    Kiwi,

    Thank you so much for the wonderful and thoughTful review. I am pleased that you enjoyed it. Appreciate the kind words. Smiles, Carol
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HI Carol, long time no see! Nice to see you are still writing this wonderful contest entries - and winning! Well done. Love, Marijke


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    Marijke,
    Haven't been able to write much lately but hope to do more soon. Thank you for the kind wishes and for stopping by to read my story. Smiles, Carol
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Mystery Author. You definitely said a lot in such few short words. I could feel the pain, agony and emotion all in the ending. Loved it. Good job at writing without the "S". Good luck in the contest.


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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    gramalot,

    Thank you for enjoying my story. Smiles to you, Carol
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Great srory, no S's anywhere, and it's a very touching as well. You have everything setting, confict, and conclusion all within the required 50 words, and it a very enjoyable read. Again good story and good luck with the contest.


 Comment Written 21-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    sibhus,

    Thank you for enjoying my story. Smiles to you, Carol
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You certainly have a winner here ! This is an excellent entry for the Life Without The letter S writing prompt contest, and I'm sure it will be a strong contender in the competition. Within such brief words you've managed to present a very poignant story -and didn't use the letter "s" ! Very well done and good luck in the contest, my friend.

Ama


 Comment Written 21-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    Fireshadow,

    Thank you for enjoying my story. Smiles to you, Carol
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Very, very nice. The second reading showed me all that you had written between the lines. Most of the "s"-less stories I've read have been flip. Yours has substance. Good luck. Lee


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    humpwhistle,

    Thank you for enjoying my story. Smiles to you, Carol
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What a poignant, intensely emotional micro story this is - love the use of strong verbs - and all without a letter S in sight - good luck in the contest :-) Brooke


 Comment Written 21-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    Brooke,

    Thanks for stopping by and enjoying the short story. Appreciate the kind words. Smiles, Carol
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Wow! Fantastic. I generally associate this contest with humour, but you have shown how well it can work on any level, with the necessary skill to do it.
Not only have you cleverly avoided the "s", but you have managed to do so within a tight, moving story.
I shall keep reading the entries, but I think I may have just found my winner.
(And I have a small bet with myself that I have sussed who you are, but time will tell...)
:~)
Sally


 Comment Written 21-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    Sally,

    I truly appreciate your kind words and for taking the time to read my story. Appreciate the stars too! Take care--Smiles to you, Carol
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With such few words (and without the letter S) you paint a touching picture. He's gone and she's here with the fetus kicking in her womb. What can be more sad?


 Comment Written 21-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    Belinda,

    Thank you for enjoying my story. Smiles to you, Carol
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oh, this is so sad. this will probably be the winner. i enjoyed reading this story. good form and good flow, a great job. i wish you the best of luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 21-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
    sweetwoodjax,

    Appreciate the encouragement and kindness. Smilesto you, Carol
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