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Darkness dwells in all of us!

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laren
 
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A very well written poem that makes us feel at sea in a storm, exposed to spirits and ghostly images. The analogy of the sea and life is also great.
Congratulations!
Laren


 Comment Written 25-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
    Laren, thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my work. Your kind words are greatly appreciated. Thank you!

reply by laren on 25-Oct-2010
    Thank you for sharing this great poem. I liked very much.
    Laren

reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
    Your welcome!

reply by laren on 25-Oct-2010
    Thank you for sharing,
    Laren
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dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Keep right on
writing on
 
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The whole piece, picture and all work very well together. Enjoyable. Well written. Flows well . I would reommend this to others. Have a great day.


 Comment Written 25-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my work. Your kind words are appreciated.
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You have great artwork and a good flow with your poem-you are descriptive and write with emotion-you write about the gothic and dark side of life and how joyous it can be--great job.


 Comment Written 25-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
    Thank your for taking the time to read and comment on my work. Your kind words are appreciated. You are very perceptive.

reply by chita on 25-Oct-2010
    You're welcome!!
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MyYiaYia
 
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If I have this right, I think we are talking about a turbulent love affair, or love making. It is unique in its descriptions and wonderfully written. I enjoyed it for what I thought it was all about. :0) Debbie


 Comment Written 25-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
    Debbie, you are very perceptive! It is about a forbidden love.
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This is a wonderful atmospheric piece of writing that takes the reader into your poem and lets them sample the raging sea one can almost taste the salt as the waves lap up against the screen of the laptop! Inspiring and most intriguing this poem has all the elements of a good piece of poetry, its creative and your words are so eloquently put to word. This piece is most powerful and expresses everything one would expect from such a storm! Most creative and well worth the six rating.

Valkarie...


 Comment Written 25-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
    Valarie, your words are music to a poets ear. Thank you! for taking the time to write a detail review. This is most useful for future works.
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Dude! This was awesome. Like from a movie...that kind of awesome. If ever they make another Pirates of the Caribbean movie--you should forward this to the writer. Well done! Coop.

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 Comment Written 25-Oct-2010


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    Thank you for your excellent review. Those are words to warm a poets heart.
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this is very well written with good form and good flow, a great job writing about this ghost ship and the eerie quality of this poem is good for the october season

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
    Thank you for your excellent review. Those are words to warm a poets heart.
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