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Exquisite and mouth-watering chocolate

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IndianaIrish
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Knowing your "fondness" for chocolate, I was delighted to read your entry for this contest, Carol. How can anyone read this and not have their mouth water?? Best wishes in the contest!
Indy :>)


 Comment Written 30-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
    Karyn,

    I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment..I apologize for my delay in thanking you..Carol
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That's it, you've done it now!I'll have to buy chocolate, and when i'm trying to lose some weight. Mind you, I only have some once a week. This piece of writing is so descriptive, it's made my mouth water. Love the artwork.


 Comment Written 30-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
    Chocolate..You better hurry because I probably scooped it all up already. Smiles, Carol
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Just looking at the artwork
I gained five pounds.
That is a lot of information good to know for the hoildays. thanks foe sharing. And the education. His is a good write.


 Comment Written 30-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
    Thank you...Thank you..Thank you, my friend.
    As always I appreciate your comments.
    Smiles, CArol

reply by misscookie on 08-Nov-2010
    It was my pleasure.
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now if i was the chocoholic that we know I am not, I would be stomping down the hallyway right now on my way to purchase this delectable yummy chocky .. but as I am not, I am going to fly down the hallyway, into the choco factory and buy all the products for the one whom I know is the chocoholic here, and so beward, I am on the way. open the doors clear the floor area, and watch out. here I come and I want all the chocolate in the factory for my big sis. you see, she is the chocoholic and I want the lot, right now.. thanks so much sis for sharing this chocoholic advertisemnet . I am sure i will be purchasing seconds, in no time... luv ya gripping yarn .... hugs from mel xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx your little sis.


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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2010
    You are a nut..so watch out or they will sweep you up and put you in one of their sweet confectionaries...Thank you, ole dear one...Smiles and hugs, Sis

reply by melyuki on 30-Oct-2010
    oooh crunchy nut chocolate might even suck me in for just a small piece of two.. yummmmmmmmm
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Where have you been? I haaven't seen you around for a while. This is another of your great stories. Your drool is excused.


 Comment Written 30-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
    Thank you...Thank you..Thank you, my friend.
    As always I appreciate your comments.
    Smiles, CArol
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I was wondering how this would be done, and I think you did a swell job with this. Perfect for you, as you have a knack for the real, emotional outreach, appeal in your writing. I enjoyed reading this, and I don't even like advertisements.


 Comment Written 30-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
    Thank you...Thank you..Thank you, my friend.
    As always I appreciate your comments.
    Smiles, CArol
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Mmmm, you've got me persuaded to try Aigner's chocolates. My mouth is already watering as I read your lines, ending with the attractive and convincing last paragraph. I think the company will use this ad as theirs ... :)


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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2010
    Belinda,

    Thanks for the wonderful review and best wishes..It would be "sweet" to win..Smiles,Carol
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You definitely got my mouth watering with this one. Great entry for this fun contest. I sincerely wish you all the best. You made me want to check out their website. I have my fingers crossed for you. Very good work with this one.


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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2010
    Sasha,

    Thanks for the best wishes and the kind review. It certainly would be "sweet" to win..lol Smiles, Carol
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Nice work on this tough challenge. You've incorporated most of the stuff they provided. One little detail you might want to check: it's a bit confusing, but I believe Pia is Peter's wife, not John's. Best wishes in the contest.


 Comment Written 29-Oct-2010



reply by the author on 30-Oct-2010
    redrider,

    I appreciate the heads up on Pia..thank you. Thank youfor the stopping by to read and comment. smiles, Carol
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This is really really a great advertisment for this company. I think they would buy it. You did an excellent job with this. I think you could write ads for a living if you wanted to. great job.


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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2010
    RKagan

    Thank you so much for the encouragement and support..Smiles, Carol
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