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When nothing goes right....

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jmdg1954
 
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Wow, you had me going for most of the story. Well played out with the charectors and dialogue. A lot of time and effort went into there well played out plan as an ample amount of time also went into yours to plan and write this out. Well done...
John


 Comment Written 06-Nov-2010



reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
    John,
    Thanks for stopping by and commenting. Your encouragment and support is greatly appreciated. Hope you have a great day...Smiles, Carol
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pickthorn
 
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The end caught me by surprise too. I thought Shelly was going to discover that Kate and Rob had something going and then discover that everybody else was in on it too. LOL Cute story. Nice job of writing... It gave me a chuckle.

pickthorn


 Comment Written 05-Nov-2010



reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
    Thank you so much for the kind review. I appreciate all your comments..Smiles, Carol
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Great story. It took me in right from the beginning and held my eyes captive right up until the end. will have to check out more of your work! Very well done.


 Comment Written 05-Nov-2010



reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
    I appreciate your kindness and encouragment more than you'll ever know..smiles, Carol
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jl & bandit
 
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You are such a great writer !! I'm happy to see this has gotten all time best !!!
CONGRATS !!!
This is a great april fools story!!
JL&B


 Comment Written 03-Nov-2010



reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate your support. Smiles, Carol
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melyuki
 
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oh you little devil.. I knew you had something up your sleeve. but april fool.. no I didnt think of that one I have to be honest.. good one sis. just throw us into complete turmoil, turn us upside down and then just say April Fool.... I should have expected as much from my big teasing sis... I will have you back for this one cheeky gal.... great little twist and very unexpected. well done big sis.... luv n hugs or should I say.. nooo.... cant say that here. might get the wrong idea... see ya, hugs from little sis. xxxxxxxxx


 Comment Written 03-Nov-2010



reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate your support. Smiles, Carol
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L.lora
 
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Oh my, I do hope Shelly gets
them good, they certainly
deserve it. Wow, well thought
out and presented, even this
skeptic got caught up in your
story and never saw it coming.
Good one. typo="The waitress [place(ed)] the plate on the table"
Lora


 Comment Written 03-Nov-2010



reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate your support. Smiles, Carol
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Veekz
 
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Hahahaha! Loved this story - I was feeling just as sick as poor Shelly thinking about how horrible the whole 'best friend and boyfriend' situation would be and was completely blindsided by the twist at the end. It may have been a twist that's been used before but you have made it unique and your own by building up such a different story prior. Truly laughed out loud :)


 Comment Written 02-Nov-2010



reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate your support. Smiles, Carol
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Gert sherwood
 
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Hello Carol,
Love your story you have done it again with your surprised ending.
I also got a good laugh
Fun to read.
Gert


 Comment Written 02-Nov-2010



reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate your support. Smiles, Carol
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Hey crabsalad is one of my favorites. I will be careful where I eat it from now on. I enjoyed your cute short story. You do a wonderful with them.


 Comment Written 02-Nov-2010



reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate your support. Smiles, Carol
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What a fun ride this was. You had me in stitches at the end. Great story, well written and as I said, a delight to read, keep up the great work.


 Comment Written 02-Nov-2010



reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate your support. Smiles, Carol
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