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Mistaken Identity - Part 2


Terror knocks when Shannon leasts expects it

  32 total reviews 
Comment by
ladybird
 
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A very good follow on chapter, Carol.I can understand Shannon's fear at seeing the new boss.It appeara his twin Richard has something to do with it.



Panic was in the driver's seat and racing at full throttle.
(I thought this line very descriptive.)

On to the next chapter now.


 Comment Written 07-Nov-2010



reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
    ladybird,

    Appreciate the comments and your suggestions. Carol
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minopavlic
 
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I look forward to reading the further adventures of the colorful characters you've woven into this story. The suspense as always seems to building to its own exploding cresendo.

Nice writing Carol.

Mino


 Comment Written 06-Nov-2010



reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
    Mino,

    Thanks for following the story and commenting. Smiles, CArol
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MJames82
 
 
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Great story. It took me in right from the beginning and held my eyes captive right up until the end. Can't wait to see what happens next! Very well done.


 Comment Written 05-Nov-2010



reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
    I appreciate your kindness and encouragment more than you'll ever know..smiles, Carol
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Icy fingers of fear strummed her spine. (great description)


I can't wait to see what happens next. This getting really good. So this is the same man from part one. HUMMM, we got a great story developing here.


 Comment Written 04-Nov-2010



reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
    Barbara,

    My muse is slacking and refuses to help me write, review and thank my wonderful friends like you for all the encouragement and support...thus I lag behind. I appreciate all your comments and encouragement..Smiles, Carol
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melyuki
 
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ok, you clever one.. you have done it again. gone and written something outstanding and I dont have a 6 to throw your way. sis, this is really good, I have no idea what you have up your sleeve for this adventure.. and it grasped me from the beginning... that brain of yours continues to surprise ..... great job sis. Luv it so far.. and I am sure the next chapter will be equally as exciting in an entirely new way.... what a writer you are.... sheer brilliance i say... now that is giving you something to wrap your head around today ey... lots of luv sis, from your little sis from downunder.. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


 Comment Written 04-Nov-2010



reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
    Sis,

    If only you could twitch your nose and make me type faster and read faster..Thanks! Love Sis
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Gert sherwood
 
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Hi Carol,
I love how you had Shannon all upset.
Great dialogue as usual.
Oh,, you are so clever left us hanging again to see what is going to happen next.

Gert


 Comment Written 04-Nov-2010



reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
    Gert,

    Thank you as always for the wonderful review, comments and encouragement. I am glad you enjoyed the story.

    smiles,Carol
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jl & bandit
 
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love the suspence in this story, and the humor and the terror...ok I like the whole thing !!!
you already know you are one of my all time favorites, stories like this are the reason why.
WELL DONE !
jl&b


 Comment Written 04-Nov-2010



reply by the author on 04-Nov-2010
    JL&B,

    Been having a few bad days again so your sweet comments put a smile on my face and warmed my heart...You're the best! Thank you...

    smiling at you, Carol
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JeffreyStone
 
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Lots of tension and subtle suspense throughout with and eruption of terror at the end. Told with your usual excellent narration and dialogue. Your characters step out of the page and come to life. Great job. Jeffrey


 Comment Written 04-Nov-2010



reply by the author on 04-Nov-2010
    Jeffrey,

    You know how I feel about your writing so I am honored when you read and enjoy something of mine. Thanks...Carol
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daniela.albu
 
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Shannon obviously has no idea that Cassandro has a twin brother. But why is she so frightened when she sees the article. Or is it the policeman turned rapist article that caused Shannon to react like this and run barefoot out of the office?

The tension and mystery are excellently balanced and actually reading part 2 made me go back and read part 1 too.


 Comment Written 04-Nov-2010



reply by the author on 04-Nov-2010
    daniela,

    Thank you for taking the time to read this chapter and return to read the first one too. I truly appreciate your support and hope you will become a fan and continue to follow. Really appreciate it. Smiles, Carol
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Meshe Nair
 
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Wow! Very interesting story. I have been engrossed with this story from start to finish. I would like to know what is upsetting Shannon after seeing Matt Cassandro's face in newspaper?

One misspelled word

door frame. "Matt Cassandra ... = door frame. "Matt Cassandro... I think the ending a needs to be changed to o

Good read

Meshe Nair


 Comment Written 03-Nov-2010



reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
    Thank you as always for the wonderful review, comments and encouragement. I am glad you enjoyed the story.

    smiles,Carol
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