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From the mouth of Babes...


A conversation with a child while driving

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Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
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'The Little Diva' is so cute. This little anecdote is typical of all families and you have given us a knowledgeable insight into yours. Well told - dialogue is excellent.
Giddy


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2010



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
    My sincere apologies for neglecting to thank you and for copying this message..a house fire on Christmas morning and four surgeries on my honey since November seems to have put the rest of my life on hold..I sincerely appreciate your time and comments...Hope to be back writing soon. Happy New Year and wishing you the best in 2011...Smiles, Carol
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Hey Sis, I can just hear you two nattering away. amazing what comes out of babes mouths sometimes isnt it now...and wouldnt daddy just be proud.... oh yeah.. right....the honesty that we hear from little ones is so pure, and at times can inform us of many situations which perhaps we would not have been aware of.. will be an interesting time at Christmas when the whole family is at ' your house'..one wonders what will come from the mouths of babes!!! enjoyed your little conversation with Kaitlyn. amazing what 3 year olds see and hear ....and understand... thanks for sharing this one sis. love your little sis xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


 Comment Written 09-Dec-2010



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
    My sincere apologies for neglecting to thank you and for copying this message..a house fire on Christmas morning and four surgeries on my honey since November seems to have put the rest of my life on hold..I sincerely appreciate your time and comments...Hope to be back writing soon. Happy New Year and wishing you the best in 2011...Smiles, Carol
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Kids are brutally honest and will usually tell all. Sounds like you may have a little son-in-law problem. I understand as my son's ex-wife makes Satan look like Pollyanna or Little Susie Sunshine. It sure makes things on the kids and the grandparents when things are said in the presence of the kids.


 Comment Written 09-Dec-2010



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
    My sincere apologies for neglecting to thank you and for copying this message..a house fire on Christmas morning and four surgeries on my honey since November seems to have put the rest of my life on hold..I sincerely appreciate your time and comments...Hope to be back writing soon. Happy New Year and wishing you the best in 2011...Smiles, Carol

reply by RebelRose on 04-Jan-2011
    A house fire...as if you didn't already have enough on you. I pray this year brings about an end to all this misery you have had to put up with over the past few months. I hope your honey finds his way to a healthier life this year and all your troubles be just a bad memory. No need to apologize for anything. Just take care of what you have to take of and we'll be glad to hear from you when you're able.
    Patty
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That's so sad her father is projecting that onto his own daughter; lucky she has a wonderful Nan like you to counter balance things :)

I sad read but a well written one.

I do hope things improve for your family.

-Veekz xo


 Comment Written 09-Dec-2010



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
    My sincere apologies for neglecting to thank you and for copying this message..a house fire on Christmas morning and four surgeries on my honey since November seems to have put the rest of my life on hold..I sincerely appreciate your time and comments...Hope to be back writing soon. Happy New Year and wishing you the best in 2011...Smiles, Carol
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It can be very surprising what the little ones will tell us if we have an open ear to hear. Sounds like her daddy's got some issues that need to be settled before too long.
Well done, Buck


 Comment Written 09-Dec-2010



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
    My sincere apologies for neglecting to thank you and for copying this message..a house fire on Christmas morning and four surgeries on my honey since November seems to have put the rest of my life on hold..I sincerely appreciate your time and comments...Hope to be back writing soon. Happy New Year and wishing you the best in 2011...Smiles, Carol
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I sure was hoping this was fiction but when I checked it was not. Family dynamics can get messy. I real dislike when adults put kids in the middle. You do seem like a nice NANA.


 Comment Written 09-Dec-2010



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
    My sincere apologies for neglecting to thank you and for copying this message..a house fire on Christmas morning and four surgeries on my honey since November seems to have put the rest of my life on hold..I sincerely appreciate your time and comments...Hope to be back writing soon. Happy New Year and wishing you the best in 2011...Smiles, Carol
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So many secrets can come out of the mouth of children, right? Too bad this they are not happy ones she reveals. As a story, this is interesting, though sad.


 Comment Written 09-Dec-2010



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
    My sincere apologies for neglecting to thank you and for copying this message..a house fire on Christmas morning and four surgeries on my honey since November seems to have put the rest of my life on hold..I sincerely appreciate your time and comments...Hope to be back writing soon. Happy New Year and wishing you the best in 2011...Smiles, Carol
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Funny how she thinks that your house is theirs. Kids pick up strange things from their parents. I'd be a bit concerned about her father. Great job.


 Comment Written 09-Dec-2010



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
    My sincere apologies for neglecting to thank you and for copying this message..a house fire on Christmas morning and four surgeries on my honey since November seems to have put the rest of my life on hold..I sincerely appreciate your time and comments...Hope to be back writing soon. Happy New Year and wishing you the best in 2011...Smiles, Carol
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Hi Carol,

I think it is so cute that your granddaughter thinks your house is hers. Sounds like her daddy does need time out! We should listen more to our little ones as most are wise beyond their years and guileless. Love this story...hope all is okay. Blessings, chey


 Comment Written 09-Dec-2010



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
    My sincere apologies for neglecting to thank you and for copying this message..a house fire on Christmas morning and four surgeries on my honey since November seems to have put the rest of my life on hold..I sincerely appreciate your time and comments...Hope to be back writing soon. Happy New Year and wishing you the best in 2011...Smiles, Carol
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Aww thanks so much for choosing my little drawing for this. Your story got me sucked right in, like the innocence you portrayed through this and how it took a different edge by the end of it.


 Comment Written 09-Dec-2010



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
    My sincere apologies for neglecting to thank you and for copying this message..a house fire on Christmas morning and four surgeries on my honey since November seems to have put the rest of my life on hold..I sincerely appreciate your time and comments...Hope to be back writing soon. Happy New Year and wishing you the best in 2011...Smiles, Carol
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