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jennyrambling
 
 
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I liked this Haiku. Winter is definately here. Those winds cut through you. Dusk at four-thirty - that's afternoon! I want my days back! Nice write!


 Comment Written 09-Dec-2010



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2010
    Thank you for for review. Yes, night does come early!
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BethShelby
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I don't know where you are but I'm afaid you are right about the cold night. I observed the same thing. This is a well written haiku.


 Comment Written 09-Dec-2010



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2010
    Thank you for your review. Yes, it was cold last night!
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Veekz
 
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Nice haiku (or senyru I'm still getting those two mixed up sorry) that paints an awesome picture in the minds eye. I can actually feel the temp dropping as I'm picturing the warm cloud cover fading away to reveal the starry clear sky :)

Great descriptive piece that tells a whole story in just a few sentences!


 Comment Written 09-Dec-2010



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2010
    Thank you for your kind words. I also get poetry terms mixed up, but let's not worry about that.
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lisasolorio1
 
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Took me a minute to register what you were writing. Everyone expresses themselves differently and everyone percieves things differently. With that said nice job on your poem. Merry Christmas.


 Comment Written 09-Dec-2010



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2010
    Thank you for your kind words.

reply by the author on 10-Dec-2010
    Thank you for your kind words.
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