Nice haiku (or senyru I'm still getting those two mixed up sorry) that paints an awesome picture in the minds eye. I can actually feel the temp dropping as I'm picturing the warm cloud cover fading away to reveal the starry clear sky :)
Great descriptive piece that tells a whole story in just a few sentences!
Comment Written 09-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2010
Thank you for your kind words. I also get poetry terms mixed up, but let's not worry about that.