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Ecstasy Is The Soul's Escape


An essential experience of oneness in sensuality.

  18 total reviews 
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Suzie B
 
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Visually and emotionally stunning work.

I have no wish to make comments that break this mood.
The Seal Of Quality is well earned.
Suzie


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2009



reply by the author on 07-Sep-2009
    Thank you so so much, Suzie;)
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Suzie B
 
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hello Karina,

This is such an intricately woven tapestry...rich and vibrant with color and shade. You reach in to the psyche and tap softly at the door. Inviting us on a journey that touches us as it frees us.

Thank you.
Suzie


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2009



reply by the author on 07-Sep-2009
    Yes, enter, dear one, I welcome your beautiful reviews:)
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Congratulations on the SOQ. It is no wonder. THis piece is magnificent. Your writing is always some of the most enjoyable on the site--polished and professional. I loved the subject and the support of it throughout this piece. Well stated and presented.


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2009



reply by the author on 04-Sep-2009
    Thank you so so much, dear Ellie:)
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cheyennewy
 
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Hi Karina...it is easy to see why you have awarded the seal of quality. This write is intelligent and has the wisdom of someone who knows about life. Love-making is the art of surrender but in a good way, and not to be confused with giving up. I read somewhere that dolphins are the only other species that has sex for the pleasure of it. Excellent thoughts here....blessings...chey


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2009



reply by the author on 04-Sep-2009
    Ahhh, dolphins, my favorite!!! Thank you, dear Cheyenne;)
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Yeah, this is just really well done and really has a strong verse tone to it without going overboard. Good strong points, kind of a roll to the sentences. The persuasive tone is excellent and done like Aquinas. The chaos created by livng our lives. Maybe this would be better. You might look at trying out colon a little here and there for the comparisons.


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2009



reply by the author on 04-Sep-2009
    Thank you so much, SS:)
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Wow. This was just some exceptional writing right here. I loved it. I like the thought that if conceiving were the only purpose of love making would we not conceive each time it happened. Humans and Dolphins are the only animals that mate for pleasure. I loved the imagery of this chapter. Very insightful. Great work. A great combination of logic and passion- Sam


 Comment Written 03-Sep-2009



reply by the author on 04-Sep-2009
    Thank you so so much, dear SS:)
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Karina, your rich and poetic prose is polished and a joy to read. You clearly make your point here and peak the reader's interest in your book. It is both a seductive and satisfying prologue.

Well done.



 Comment Written 03-Sep-2009



reply by the author on 04-Sep-2009
    Thank you so so much, dear Amicus:)
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rama devi
 
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Ah, I had a feeling from your poetry that you follow a tantric path.
your prose writing is as polished and professional as your poetry. Bravo.

My only concern with this topic is that the tantric path is meant to be taught only to adepts (according to my understanding and what I've been taught) and not to the general public. Bt I am not critiquing the content. This is all excellent.

Warmly, rd


 Comment Written 03-Sep-2009



reply by the author on 04-Sep-2009
    Dearest Rama Devi, I believe those of us who have invested into expanding our consciousness are so full of God's perfect energies of love and light, many teachings can be pouring forth... Truth is for adepts, but little truths pouring forth from the greater one is how we feed those who have lost their way in this densest of places:) I am so grateful fro your lovely visit and welcome your beautiful reviews:)
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Karina,

this was a wonderful introduction for your book. Your dedication was touching and a great tribute to the person you've chosen to dedicate it to. Great work.

Reggie


 Comment Written 03-Sep-2009



reply by the author on 04-Sep-2009
    Thank you, dear R:)
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Donovan
 
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This is more than the old man can take. I think you do write well, it flows and the message is clear. It also think it makes the reader wonder...do I believe all of this...which is a good question to always ask.


 Comment Written 03-Sep-2009



reply by the author on 04-Sep-2009
    Thank you, dear Donovan;)
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