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  27 total reviews 
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Rasmine
 
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Rating of Chapter 4 -
A Bewitching Brew
Hello Dawn,

My favorite part of this poem is:
The moral of my story is
watch out for girls in black,
who offer you a quenching fizz;
your heart they might attack

Take care


 Comment Written 23-Jul-2017



reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
    Thanks so much again, really appreciate the time you took to read my work and review.
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Rasmine
 
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Rating of Chapter 8 -
Kentucky Bridge
Hello, again. :)

This is very sad and very well written. I never see any of your writing on here, so I hope you get these messages. Congratulations having two Seal of Qualities!!!

Take care, :)


 Comment Written 23-Jul-2017



reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
    Thanks again and for the congrats. I don't write too much anymore, mind is not quiet enough I guess. This was loosely based on a story my grandfather had told us as a child. He actually saw this spirit on a bridge on his way home from Kentucky one year. Thanks again.

reply by Rasmine on 27-Jul-2017
    Cool!
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Rasmine
 
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Rating of Chapter 3 -
Haunting
OMG, yes, and God. I like to think there is a powerful energy that is watching over all of us. I don't think the killer will get away with doing what he did. I don't know how anyone could do this.

Good writing! I just happened to open the Seals to find your writing. :)


 Comment Written 23-Jul-2017



reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
    Awww thanks so much for taking the time to read these older pieces. What a beautiful review, thanks again.
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MTF1955
 
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Rating of Chapter 8 -
Kentucky Bridge
Excellent! Flowed so beautifully. I've never thought of horror and poetry together but I loved this. Great writing. Mary


 Comment Written 26-Mar-2016



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
    Ahh thank you so much for visiting this older piece. This was based on a story my Grandfather used to tell us about something he actually saw. This poem means a lot to me and I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
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writeapoem
 
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Rating of Chapter 8 -
Kentucky Bridge
I can see why you received recognition for this write on horror and crime. It was a well told ghostly story. The bridge a good promp in a thriller.


 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016



reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016
    Oh thanks so much for visiting this older piece and for taking the time to comment.
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artisart4u
 
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Rating of Chapter 13 -
Reminiscing
I like your poem about reminiscing, there are so many things one can say.

Sometimes reminiscing can bring bad thoughts as well as good thoughts. Maybe people just want to forget things and should just let it go.

Your poem has good rhythm.

I sure people will like this and relate to it also.


Good luck with your poem.



 Comment Written 30-May-2015



reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this older piece
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M & M
 
 
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Rating of Chapter 8 -
Kentucky Bridge
I liked the old cover bridge and the figure and how it glowed. It read with beautiful words which I coalition ' t describe. I wrote poetry and won a golden award but I wanted to write fiction. I have a book out called, "Friends of Darkness" I wrote for my husband who died 5 years ago. It doesn't feel any different writing a book. Keep up the good work and who knows you 'LOL win something but don't let it go to your head.

I have to say it was great and I'm sure you'll write more beautiful ones like this one. I'd like to see more.

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 Comment Written 11-Aug-2008


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Moira's Amethyst
 
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Rating of Chapter 6 -
A Seasonal Affair
"A blizzard raves across the path
of Spring and Autumn's torrid flight,
and Winter smiles in aftermath;
they outperformed this glacial night."

I'll tell ya, that's one impressive ending to a wonderfully written piece.
Nicely done with the wording. Five stars.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2007



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2007
    Thanks for the great review on such an oldie. I do believe that is probably one of my favorites of all that I've written.
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Little Dove
 
 
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Rating of Chapter 1 -
Afire in the Sky
Dawn of Tomorrow, that is a very beautiful poem and I agree it is amazing that they do that. Your poem is very lovely and flowing smoothly. You've done a wonderful job, keep up the great work. :)


 Comment Written 07-Apr-2006


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JBrackett
 
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Rating of Chapter 1 -
Afire in the Sky
I don't know if you are still looking for photographs of the courtship flight of the Bald Eagle, but if you are, go to http://www.toledo-bend.us/index.shtml?eagles3

BTW, while I know you don't need me to tell you this, your poem is outstanding. Thank you for sharing it.


 Comment Written 18-Feb-2006


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