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Six-sixteen on Christmas Morn


My Best Christmas present ever! (Quatern)

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LisaSilva
 
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What a wonderful Christmas present from God. I remember the day the nurse handed me my baby and how sweet the feeling still is. I will never forget the miracle of birth and how it brought me golden faith back from the cold in December.


 Comment Written 23-Dec-2011



reply by the author on 26-Dec-2011
    Lisa, Thank you so much for your kind review and comments. It is an amazing feeling! Lil
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I blurted out "She's Hannah Rose"
And after saying that I froze
At Six-sixteen on Christmas morn
Didn't plan that name, I'd have sworn


Rose

I named my daughter Melissa Rose I love that name...Ron


 Comment Written 23-Dec-2011



reply by the author on 26-Dec-2011
    Ron, Thank you so much for your kind review and comments. Much appreciated, Lil
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What a cool poem. My dad was born on Christmas so we celebrated Christmas on Christmas eve and his birthday on Christmas day. Maybe she will do the same. Very cute picture too. :)


 Comment Written 23-Dec-2011



reply by the author on 26-Dec-2011
    Modee, Thank you so very much for your kind review and comments. I am glad you enjoyed it. Lil
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this is very well written, fireflylil, a great job writing this poem about the name you gave your daughter brought you joy from God like he gave Hannah her joy when Samuel was born. i wrote a poem about that for my bible poetry class.


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2011



reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
    Thank you so much for your kind review and comments.Yes, I am blessed, Lil
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Carolyn 12
 
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This is a beautiful poem and tirbute to your daughter. The love and joy is evident. What a blessing you were given. You are right God is in control..


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2011



reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
    Thank you so much for your kind review and comments. Yes, I am blessed and God watches over us, for sure. Lil
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God is just that way. I lost my Grandma,just before Christmas in 1969,I was 12. Family went into 'further' turmoil and I was living on the street,by 14. Christmas was always sad,thinking of how it once had been. In 1976 on Christmas day,God spoke in my heart that I was pregnant, and it was my Christmas gift from Him. Sure enough I was. My first daughter was born ,we named her Cherie Michal,it means sweet running water. God has such a good memory and delights in us as we do in ours. You are very blessed to be doing so well. I cared for a lady 10 years,who had an aneurysm and was parallelized on the left side. She never was able to get past it. I always believed she could have walked again. But it broke her emotionally. I had to leave her because it was killing my body on my right side,and Dr. Said I'd end up with surgery on my neck and shoulder,or in a wheel chair. Your poem and your baby are both beautiful.Perfect structure and rhyme.Very well written.


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2011



reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
    Thank you so much for your kind review and comments. God sure has his way of letting us know he is there. I am doing well considering the massive stroke I survived. I am blessed in many ways. My poem "My Cross to Bear" tells of my stroke and recovery. I have another poem "On the Wings of a Dove" which tells more of the story of Hannah and my Mother, If you would like to read them. Thanks again for the big 6! Wow, Bless you! Lil
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Hi, Firefly, I always love quaterns for the 'falling' line. Especially if the line is as sweet as this. It is unique how the name just came out of nowhere! But why do you consider the best 18 years whereas Hannah is now 26? Just curious...:)


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2011



reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
    Thank you so much for your kind review and comments. Hannah is 26 now and on her own living with a wonderful man and hopes to make me a grandmother one day. I don't see her as often as I would like, but yes, she does continue to give me joy.Thanks, Lil
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This is a very lovely poem, fireflylil. It is a beautiful picture and she is a lovely baby. It is clear from your poem that she is very much loved.


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2011



reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
    Thank you so much for your kind review and comments. Yes, she is loved, and I am blessed. Lil
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I liked this and I hope you are able to give it to her. I'm sure she knows what a blessing she is to you and I'm sure you mean just as much to her. Great job


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2011



reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
    Thank you so much for your kind review and comments. Yes, I will share with her. I have lots of great stories from raising her that I want to write and publish in a book. Lil

reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
    Thank you so much, WIVA Red Bird, for your kind review and comments. Yes, I will be giving this to her. There are so many great stories of raising Hannah. She was an amazing child. I have another poem called "On The Wings Of A Dove" that tell more of the story and connection between Hannah and my Mother, If you should care to read it. Thanks again. Blessings, Lil
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What a gorgeous baby in the picture! My nice look like her.. Beauty smile... I enjoyed your poem very much, lovely poem about your daughter. The picture really adds a candy to the poem.. Thanks for sharing it!


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2011



reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011
    Thank you, that is my Hannah at 3 months old. Thank you so much for your kind review and comments. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
    Lil
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