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What is Spiritual to Me

Some spiritual things

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Comment by

meeshu

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ahh, you beat me to it in your author's notes. I was thinking this is like a spiritual checklist. it is a great way to stay in the present and be awed by it all. very good, Yvon....................meeshu

Comment Written 09-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019

Why thank you Meeshu

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Jeffrey L. Michaux

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I love this Yvon. It's beautiful, absolutely beautiful! I love the way you describe everything you see so vividly and in such great detail. The way you write this causes the reader to visualize what you're describing without any artwork. I enjoyed this. Well done!

Comment Written 09-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019

Thanks for the glowing review

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estory

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I like the listing element in the poetry, it is quite contemporary in look and feel. What I found interesting about the poem is that you found all these really physical images to describe a spiritual experience. The seeds of the trees, the stars in the sky, the depths of space, farmers planting their crops, the leaves falling from a tree, the sunshine on a cold winter's day. All things that seem like miracles in and of themselves, and I suppose they are. We often take all these little things for granted. estory

Comment Written 09-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019

Thanks for the review. There is so much to say and so little time.

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Janice Canerdy

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Your poem is well-written, exuberant, and uplifting. We all have that list
of things--both spiritual and physical--that matter most to us. I thank God for
fulfilling my needs and many of my wants.

Comment Written 08-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019

Thanks for the review. We all have special gifts given to us.

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Sandra du Plessis

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A very well-written poem to explain the different places where we can find our spirituality. God gives us the ability to see His spirit in everything around us and how to apply it in our natural lives.

Comment Written 08-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019

thanks for the review God Bless

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Artasylum

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Yvon... I am enjoying your poetry... this is sweet, soft and peaceful... that works form me...
The descent of a leaf as it falls from a tree
A cloud drifting by carried on a cool breeze
The sun shining and warming a cold winter's day
The laughter of children in fields as they play

Comment Written 08-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019

Thanks for the review. There are so many things in life that shine with Divinity. Many are aware others unfortunately are not. Keep shining!

Comment by

Miss Sherry

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Excellent

Metaphysical joy. I think people miss so much. I used to garden and the wonder of plant emerging from the soil where it has been transposed into an identical copy of its seed. Or birds that are so beautiful they break your heart with wonder. This poem is such a tender walk through life. I enjoyed it tremendously.

Comment Written 08-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019

Nature and working with earth can be divine Thanks for the review.

reply by Miss Sherry on 08-Mar-2019

You are most welcome!!

reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019

Comment by

HealingMuse

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Hi Yvon,

GASP! This is breathtakingly gorgeous and I feel great resonance with your words, my friend. Absolutely stellar! On a scale of 1-6, this is at least a 10. I'm sorry to say I am already out of sixers for this week, else you'd surely have one. Thank you so much for sharing this delightful contest entry with us. This should be a strong contender! Best of luck. Jan :-)

Comment Written 07-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019

Thank you for the stellar review!!!

Comment by

24chas

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This was a good read, Yvon. I liked the way it flowed and each verse was better than the last. I really loved the phrase you used, 'this spaceship of life.' Very cool. Nice job.

Comment Written 07-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019

Thanks for the review.

Comment by

Donka Kristeva

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Excellent

This poem has good rhyme and pace, is a very descriptive, detailed in narration and is uplifting. The second part touches in a deeper way the realm of Spirit.

Comment Written 07-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019

Thanks for the review. That was the way it was meant to be.

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