This is a stunning work you've written here, and it is a gift to those who see it that way. I remember well my rebirth, of noticing truly the sunset for the first time, the beautiful birth of the new day, and God's heralds praising the maker of Heaven and Earth. Eloquent imagery in the descriptive language of the work, even rhythm and flawless couplet rhyming, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
Thanks for the review. God Bless. Try freemeditation.com you may find a deeper quest within your Self. Know Thy Self
reply by royowen on 07-Mar-2019
I doubt I could anything deeper than the depths of God dear God
You have written a great poem. Life, all of life is spiritual to you. That is great. You are a better person for it. There is so much life around us and above us. Thank the Lord that made it. Great work.
This is extremely enlightening and very
beautiful. I love the imagery and description
and your rhythm and flow in this lovely poem.
You certainly know what to be thankful for
as we all should wonder at God's greatness.
All of life's beauty is before us. It is
for us to open our eyes and witness it for
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Oh yes the spiritual matters to me and you put some of my most favorite ones to work in this writing as well. I really like this and yes you could of gone on and on. It is wonderful and I wish you the best.
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