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LancsLass
 
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Very amusing and probably closer than is comfortable to my first stutterings through computer education.

I think I found an unintestinal one here: 'I'm the last remaining occupant left (on/in) a short yellow bus...'

'Course, I'm still thinking about the gigolo at the pizza party--where was that again?

Cheers, Anna


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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2012
    Thanks, Anna. I'm delighted you enjoyed this bit of nonsense. You're right, that flub was unintestinal---thanks for spotting it. Peace, Lee
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Laughed my head off. Can you get your tongue any farther into your cheek? I could have read another ten pages of this. By the way, I now know you really play the accordion. Anyone could say they did, but they won't know the important of Lady In Spain. I adore you and your humor.

I couldn't make heads or tailwind out of any (of) it.


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2012



reply by the author on 24-Jan-2012
    Hey, purr, I suppose I could get my tongue into your cheek (kidding). I grew up in avery Polish town. Most of my little friends lugged around accordians the size of Studebakers---and with more chrome. Thanks, purr, for the stars and the comments. Peace, Lee
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Nicely done! I laughed out loud in multiple places. It's nice to see things from a "non-techy" or as you might say "non-ticky" point of view. I'm assuming your plays on words were deliberate ("low and be told" "...never crease")? It doesn't really matter. This is a very entertaining piece!

Excellent job!


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2012



reply by the author on 24-Jan-2012
    Thank you so much, Jenny. I'm delighted you enjoyed. Peace, Lee
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Lee, this is the perfect voice. Funny and genuine. Genuinely funny? That, too. No doubt I'm late with these things you'll want to look at:

occupant left a short yellow bus - left in?

andrecommended - space

Thank you for forging ahead and learning boldish. We'd be lost without your cooking tips. :) Nancy



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 Comment Written 23-Jan-2012



reply by the author on 24-Jan-2012
    Thank you, Nancy. I think you might have gotten to this piece while I was still editing. Did you get paid? I hope you got a chuckle anyway. Peace, Lee

reply by N.K. Wagner on 24-Jan-2012
    I believe so. But now I'll have to read again to be sure I've read the final draft. :) Nancy
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I absolutely loved this story. I think many of us started this way. But you described it so funny. I remember my sister giving me a book once for computer ignorants.

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012
    Thank you, robina. I'm sorry you didn't get paid---I was still editing. I much appreciate. Peace, Lee

reply by robina1978 on 23-Jan-2012
    No problem, Ine
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