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Forever My Love


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Raffaelina Lowcock
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These are words that would caress one's mind and melt one's soul. And yet to find that you lost the treasure that you cherished is breaking my heart. Such a lovely poem comes only from a beautiful heart.


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
    Thank you, dear friend. I am glad you could relate. My friend lost his wife. Thank goodness I didn't have to endure that. check a post of mine from about ten years ago called "Top of The Mountain" however. I think you will understand because you have a big heart too, Ralf. X Bob
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This tells the story of a man who truly adored his wife. It depicts a happy loving marriage and the pain of loss. The regrets that sometimes happen with death are depicted too.
Keep writing
Joan


 Comment Written 16-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
    Thank you, Joan. :) Bob

reply by dragonpoet on 16-Jun-2019
    My pleasure, Bob.
    Joan

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
    :) Bob
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Joan E.
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I enjoyed your past Valentine's Day poem and hope it did well in the contest. I am certain it pleased your friend, since you captured the sense of unconditional love so well. I particularly liked your "treasure/gift/bouquet" metaphors. Cheers- Joan


 Comment Written 25-Oct-2013



reply by the author on 25-Oct-2013
    Thanks so much, Joan. You picked an old one, but one I am proud of...Blessings..Bob
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One thing to remember we've to tell our love ones that we care and we love them so much. Because they can't never hear us anymore if time comes.

Lovely poem!!!

I'm back and dusting my feathers right now!

Love much
Lynn:0)


 Comment Written 27-Mar-2012



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
    Thanks so much, Vlad. Good to see you back...Bob

reply by Vladilynn on 28-Mar-2012
    Yap!!! posted too, maybe you can check it now, because contest is finished:)
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This was so tender and touching
Till I saw your notes I thought this was you at the last line
I think this was such a lovely and kind. Thing to do for your friend
Your words have a sweet refrain and it beautifully composed
I am sure it will do well in the contest if Only I had a six left it would be winging it,s way to you
I wish you all the best Bob


 Comment Written 14-Feb-2012



reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
    Thanks so much, Peg. Ireally appreciate such a thoughtful review. Bob
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Though somewhat sad and melacholy,
your well chosen words speak well
of a relationship and all it has
been and will forever be in this
easy to read gentle poem. Good luck
with your contest... no nits or spags.
Lora


 Comment Written 11-Feb-2012



reply by the author on 11-Feb-2012
    Thanks so much, Lora. So glad you liked this one too. Bob
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Hi Bob, I'm so glad I found your poem, is absolutely beautiful. I thought it was for a loved one of your but I see in your author notes is was for a friend. It's a lovely gift for your friend.

So nice to read your work again.


 Comment Written 09-Feb-2012



reply by the author on 10-Feb-2012
    Hi, Bryana. So good to hear from you again. I will watch for your work also. Bob
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adewpearl
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Lovely photo
good consonance of soft S sounds in see/same/face/startled/surprise
and in so/sparkle/grace/yes/deliciously
What a wonderfully upbeat tone leading to a poignant closing :-) Brooke


 Comment Written 09-Feb-2012



reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
    Thanks so much, Brooke. I love to receive compliments from you. Encouraging. Bob
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Hi Bob

This is beautiful Bob, truly heartwarming.

This stanza touches me
"You are my treasure--
a truly precious gift.
wrapped in a bouquet of love
that will never die."

Well said and described with a
feathered magical quilt, wonderful.

I can see that you are truly a lucky man,
good for you Bob


 Comment Written 09-Feb-2012



reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
    Aaaah! Thanks so much, Tom. I am encouraged by your remarks. I really don't write that much poetry, but when I am inspired, I go for it. LOL..Nice to hear from you, my new friend. Hold down the east...I'll keep an eye on the west. LOL..Bob
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Judian James
 
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Oh Bob, that final verse was a shocker. I think because that was your intention, as the rest of the poem is in the present tense, a simple solution with even more impact, is to space that final verse down more. It paces the reader and perpares them for the surprise. EXCELLENT I'm so sorry for your friends loss.


 Comment Written 09-Feb-2012



reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
    Hi, Jude...Long time no hear from? LOL..So good to have you stop by though. Always is. I took your advice...hope I did it right...would you look and let me know? Thanks so much....Bob
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