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Ecstasy Is The Soul's Escape


An essential experience of oneness in sensuality.

  75 total reviews 
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angelina24
 
 
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Rating of Chapter 12 -
The Crown of Wealth
Very well-written and inspiring to me! You did a spectacular job and you should very proud and happy for yourself! Good on adjectives and expressing yourself! Keep up the good work!


 Comment Written 24-Apr-2007



reply by the author on 26-Aug-2009
    Thank you so much, Angelina:)
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Megaben
 
 
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Rating of Prologue -
The Golden Gate
Very well written. You're vocabulary fits well with the style you write with. As far as for a prologue to a book, it feels more like an "Author's Note." But as I haven't delved yet into your love story, I can't say for sure if that will remain the feeling.

I think the point you made about how children would be conceived every time if sex was simply for reproduction was an interesting and valid one. I once heard a preacher tell his congregation if they were having sex and not planning on having children, they were sinning.

But that brings up another point. You mention the ten commandments, which is a religious belief, but so is sex belonging to marriage. I'm interested and I'm sure I'll find out as I read along, if your talk of lovemaking as such an incredible experience is directed towards a union between just two souls, or a soul and whichever soul they are with at the time.

What about lust, too? Sorry I'm rambling here, I know it's just a prologue, but it spawns questions and interest. Which is good to keep the readers attention. Isn't sex sometimes pure animal lust? Look at college students nowadays, and how some girls feel that they HAVE to have sex with their partner. And the guys don't necessarily want the union of two souls like you speak of, they might just want climax.... Anyway, well written, and interesting. Good job. :)


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2006



reply by the author on 12-Aug-2006
    Hello, Ben, excellent questions and comment! Thank you so much. I believe that making love in general, regardless of the reason, is a very incredible experience and depending on the awareness of the people involved, can be very Holy. The pleasures involved are the closest thing to God we can feel here on Earth:)

reply by Megaben on 12-Aug-2006
    Couldn't agree more, and you have lovely poetry.

reply by the author on 12-Aug-2006
    Thank you so much:)
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Mountainstar2
 
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Rating of Chapter 5 -
Cleansing Rites
Well written...
Beautiful Poem. Interesting and entertaining until the end of the Poem. I enjoyed this Poem very much. This writer I would like to see more of in the future of their
writing, because this is good. Nothing to add here. I liked it all just the way the
writer presented it...until then...just simply...write-on...Mountainstar2...


 Comment Written 03-Aug-2006



reply by the author on 12-Aug-2006
    Thank you so much:)
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david3295
 
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The Golden Gate
My congratultions on this article and the richly deserved award. It is undeniably revealing, peeling off the layers in which mankind has enshrouded sex. Very well expressed both in terms of content and writing.


 Comment Written 16-Jul-2006


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GeorgeRoberts
 
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Rating of Chapter 6 -
Husband and Wife
Exceptional poem. You may need to change the font colour for the first part, ie. In previous chapters, as it is black on blue and hard to read. Some really wonderful lines, my favourite of which is 'Our sated vessels amply pour
Aurora's flux through passion's ark'. Flows well and has a sound structure. Great work. Kind regards - GeorgeRoberts


 Comment Written 30-Jun-2006


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MikeSamford
 
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Rating of Chapter 6 -
Husband and Wife
: Husband and Wife by Karina J. Belkin
Well written prose I find here, with a lot of thought going into it's make up and even more coming out to the reader to touch, little not to like in this one, just a fine job of writing.


 Comment Written 29-Jun-2006


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TomandOma
 
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Rating of Chapter 6 -
Husband and Wife
Karina, this is the most lyrical poem I've read on fanstory; in fact it's probably the most lyrical one ever read. This is in spite of the fact that I couldn't read the first verse due to the words fading into the background. I loved every word of it, the images were brilliant and luminous, describing a perfect union.

I usually do not consider a picture as part of a poem, but this beautiful illustration is truly a strong reinforcement of your theme. Totally lovely. Doris


 Comment Written 29-Jun-2006


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Irina
 
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Rating of Chapter 6 -
Husband and Wife
"souls in flight"

You said so much in two words!
I like the flow and a deep meanning of all lines!

My favorite lines are:

"In effervescence springing life;
Baptized as one, husband and wife"


Very strong and to the point!
Art work is a wonderful too!

Thank you, Karina!


 Comment Written 29-Jun-2006


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Deesire
 
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Rating of Chapter 6 -
Husband and Wife
Lovely, very elegant words you have chose. I found the intro difficult to read being black on dark blue. Might just be my computer screen but thought I would point that out. Loved the notes at the bottom of the poem. Deesire


 Comment Written 29-Jun-2006


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Angelica104
 
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Husband and Wife
Great picture and the poem is a nice one on how two people together and coming as one, i really did enjoy this one very good story.


 Comment Written 29-Jun-2006


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