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Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Is this the end"

This is about a detective solving a murder

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Thatguypk
 
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You've given me an appetite. I'll have to go back and start at the beginning. This is the first chapter I've read, but then I'm Irish, doing things backwards is ok. A very enjoyable read. Thanks.


 Comment Written 11-Oct-2012



reply by the author on 11-Oct-2012
    Thank you so much I am re writing next week one last time fingers crossed lol then putting it on a balloon package might be beneficial to wait as this means every chapter will award you a bonus thanks again

reply by Thatguypk on 11-Oct-2012
    Thanks for the tip off. :-)
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Healthyheartpoet
 
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The ts detective is entering a new phase of her life. She now has a lot of support, but she still does not know who killed Helen. Little by little the puzzle is being un ravelled. Anticipation is building.


 Comment Written 11-Oct-2012



reply by the author on 11-Oct-2012
    Thank you so much for your kind words much appreciated

reply by Healthyheartpoet on 11-Oct-2012
    you are most welcome
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bossladyone
 
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I like it. You know I am a fan. This was great and can't wait for book 2. I am so glad I got a chance to read this. You know I didn't read that much till I joined this site. Thank you for sharing


 Comment Written 10-Oct-2012



reply by the author on 11-Oct-2012
    Thank you so much my friend for your encouragement and help I just want to see if this book sells before I go for book 2 this one took a lot out of me lol so I need to recuperate a bit as well but hopefully book 2 will e out shortly
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Kingsland
 
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This is a well written chapter from your book. I haven't been following it, but I decided to read a chapter here and I'm glad that I did. This chapter had good imagery in it and was entertaining... John


 Comment Written 10-Oct-2012



reply by the author on 11-Oct-2012
    Thank you so much for your kind words I appreciate them
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MelReyn
 
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"being in two minds..." Did you mean, being of two minds? Other than that little blurb, I saw nothing major. The ending leaves plenty of room for the next book. AND, by the way, congratulations for finishing your book! You should go out to dinner, or celebrate somehow. That is quite the accomplishment. Good work!


 Comment Written 10-Oct-2012



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
    Thank you so much for all of your kind words and encouragement
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Adri7enne
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Seems like a fine conclusion to a story. I won't way I know what that story was, but I enjoyed your writing style. Nice mix of dialogue and narrative. Good, direct prose, well focused on telling the story and setting it up for a continuation. Well done, dmt.


 Comment Written 10-Oct-2012



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
    Thank you so much for your kind words
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diannen
 
 
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I wanted to read on to find out what happens. The one thing I did not enjoy so much was when Bud was telling Jet the story about what happened, it got a bit confusing with all the names etc., but I still enjoyed it. Good Work!


 Comment Written 10-Oct-2012



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
    Thank you
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Georgia333
 
 
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An interesting piece that' cries out for twist in the tale. The story has embodied passion and flows well, enabling he reader to imagine the scene.well done


 Comment Written 10-Oct-2012



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
    Thank you so much for your kind words and serenity
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chasdflynn
 
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Yes it has to be continued, as you left us hanging on who the killer is and how she will bring him or her to justice. I enjoyed the thrill of the story and wondering, "who killed Helen"?


 Comment Written 10-Oct-2012



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
    Thank you so much book 2 will be out soon I just need to see if book one sells thanks again
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saychirah
 
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This is a good suspence-filled ending. I enjoyed your flow with words,the way you talk about your characters and the interesting nature of your story. Looking forward to part 2.You are a good writer. G'luck!


 Comment Written 10-Oct-2012



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
    Thank you so much I really appreciate it
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