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Gossip consequences

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Curly Girly
 
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This is fantastic! I simply love it. You have chosen a great image to go with it too. Well done! The words are true and I like your last line the best - very tactful - but with the same meaning. Lovely! CG


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2012



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
    Thank yousoo mch. I just love it when others 'get it's and I'm not to far out of the box. You are a great reviewer. I'll have to look at your work too.
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Multitudinous chuckles! Truly ... spit hits the fan.

I can't thank you enough for sharing this little tee-hee. It's true, you know hot news hits fan.

Hugs,
Gayle


 Comment Written 20-Sep-2012



reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
    I am so glad you got a kick out of this. It was fun.
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Well done 5-7-5. Gossip can certainly stir up a lot of problems. We would be better off looking at our own problems and let others worry about theirs~Debbie


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2012



reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
    Thanks for review, friend. Gossip always come back to that person somehow.
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5-7-5 syllable count verse format challenge successfully accomplished with your three line poem. Congratulations on your poem and good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2012



reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
    Thanks.
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Good change on words in the last line. In a shortie like this, it's best to avoid "the". Maybe change second line to hot news. Nice internal rhyme with hit and spit.


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2012



reply by the author on 18-Sep-2012
    Thanks so much for review and thoughtful suggestion. I changed that.
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 and also so very true. Gossip is like a wildfire, hard (if not impossible) to stop once it gets going. I wish you all the best in the contest.


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2012



reply by the author on 18-Sep-2012
    Thanks so much for reviewing and commenting.
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Oh, how true! It's amazing how much stuff that shows up on FaceBook etc. become major news. Stories spread, true or not, and once out there it's hard to repaid the damage that they can do. It's worse than the old telephone party line. Great closer with "Then spit hits the fan." Your syllable count is precise, and your presentation is attractive. Best of luck in the contest. judi


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2012



reply by the author on 18-Sep-2012
    The damage you are right is sometimes not easily repairable. Thanks for your thoughtful review.

reply by judiverse on 18-Sep-2012
    You're so welcome. judi
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roflmao ... does it ever? pretty crazy. now ... even crazier ... i have to write a review that is longer than the poem. best of luck~
love,
barbara


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2012



reply by the author on 18-Sep-2012
    Yes it is hard to write reviews in these. You did well my friend. Thanks.

reply by babylonia on 18-Sep-2012
    you are very welcome. our biggest complaints have been trying to write a review for a ten word or less poem. it happens.
    love,
    barbara
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Funny how that works, your last line was such a great visual hit. Well penned and I wish you good luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen


"gossip today can 5
become the news tomorrow 7
then spit hits the fan" 5


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2012



reply by the author on 18-Sep-2012
    Thanks so much for the great review.
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Very interesting contest entry, Irene. With the acceleration of our computer devices behind it, gossip tends to make the news, sometimes only because it's so outrageous. You make an excellent point in your poem. Good luck with this super entry.

Warm regards, Bev


 Comment Written 18-Sep-2012



reply by the author on 18-Sep-2012
    Exactly, anything you say could become world wide news. It is sometimes hard to tell nowadays what is the truth. Gossip can cause gossiper quite a bit of emarassment.

reply by Writingfundimension on 18-Sep-2012
    I couldn't agree more, Irene.
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