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Keeping Promises


For my oldest son

  15 total reviews 
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prayingpoet
 
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Beautiful poem to your son. We really can't ever keep them safe from everything but we sure try as parents, don't we? Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the great review. You're welcome and thanks for reading.
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Hello friend, you penned a wonderful ditty reflecting beautiful sentiments/emotions for a son who indeed any parent would be proud of; excellent rhyme/rhythm and I join you in praying to bring Eric home safely and soon, God bless.


 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012



reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the great review and kind, supportive comments.
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You should frame this with a picture of the two of you and hang it up on your wall. I think everyone should see how proud you are of your son. :) Great job with this. Maybe you should embarrass him and send this over seas for him to read :)


 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012



reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
    I think I might take your suggestion and do just that. Thank you for the stars and the great and supportive review.
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Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
Absolutely beautifully written poem of
a proud mother's love for her son whispered
in words that float down the screen in unending
warmth and feelings that caress the heart and
soul for all who stop to pause and read.
Well done


 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012



reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
    Thank you so much for the six star rating. I truly appreciate it.
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This brought tears to my eyes. Your words were so visual, and I could see your son standing there smiling back at you. You have done a wonderful job, in what sounds like difficult circumstances. I'm sure your son loves and respects you for it. Alexis x


 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012



reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the kind words. I appreciate the great rating.
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This is a beautiful poem, written with such love for your son. I really appreciate the message and the difficulties of knowing your son's in Afghanistan, while your heart is full of pride for he is standing for us all.He will be in my prayers along with all our troops! Wonderful!! Brian


 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012



reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the great review but more importantly the prayers.
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A totally wonderful write and one which you can be proud of and Eric can be too. It's hard to watch a son grow up and leave to fight for you. He is to be commended along with so many others.


 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012



reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the warm comments and the great review.

reply by Gungalo on 06-Nov-2012
    Smiling at you.
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Tearjerker...

Beautiful poem for your son.

Loved this: You stand for freedom, peace and God. But you're still my little boy.
I just pray to God to keep you safe, since I can't do it now.
Across the seas, the miles of sand, you stand for what is right.


 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012



reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the great review and kind comments.
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My husband recently retired from the military and I always asked God to keep him in His sight. I can feel your love and desire to keep protecting your son. Sounds like he is a wonderful young man. Thank you for sharing such a heartfelt poem. Have a wonderful day. :)


 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012



reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the great review and thanks to your husband for a lifetime of service. By the way, he is a wonderful man.
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Excellent write enjoyed it very much. I thank all those service men who fight for freedoms and their parents and families. We take for granted the sacrifices they and there family members make. Thanks for sharing


 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012



reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
    Thank you. I don't think we really take it for granted, as much as I think they just do their jobs so well we feel secure.
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