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| Six stars for your success at writing a fun story and including so many Beatles titles. This is very clever- the length is good because it enables you to develop the story. Thanks for the laugh. Well done!
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2016 |
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
Lisa.. lol.. I am laughing because we just talked about length and verbosity!!! Hysterical, because I was just thinking,, Lordy, she would tare this work up!!! No really, I say this all in good fun. Domino2, always told me.. Goodness Jimi, you can natter!!!
Lisa thank you for stopping by once again and for the exceptional. This is an old work and it was a challenge by a former Fanstorian who challenged me to write a poem with 3 Beatle songs and I thought, No, it would be way toooooooooo long, so I upped it to a story and created the contest by giving participants a list of every Beatle song and album. Needless to say I did not win the contest but the winner had a wonderful story with about 20 songs.
Actually, this took me only about two hour to write and I had no idea where I was going with it. Funny, I just went down the list and created the work from there. Again a huge thank you... Jimi
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Jimi, this is really impressive to fit all of these Beatles song title into a story. Each song brought back fond memories and tunes. This story resonated with me after I had used a Beatles song as an inspiration for a poem. Your story of 246 titles is masterful, although I found the titles overwhelmed the story which I found hard to follow since I am having so much fun reading the titles.
Studying the lyrics to "A Day in the Life," I am awed at the Beatles craft as poets, songwriters, and storytellers. Nearly fifty years have passed, and their songs are still inspiring people. When I wrote my poem "Another Attack," I thought, "I want to write poetry that people will read and enjoy fifty years from now." You can learn a lot from the Beatles. You crafted a psychedelic Magical Mystery Tour with their song titles. Thank you for revising this post.
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
Sis Cat, sir!!!!!! how are you? This was such a fun thing to do. A friend had challenged me to write a poem using three Beatle songs. I told him I would do better than that. I just kept writing and had no idea where it would take me. It did not take me very long. Perhaps two hours and honestly I did no editing until I posted, but it was minimal through suggestions. This is an old piece. Thank you so very much for stopping by, thank you for your continued support of my work and yes I am quite sure it rattled your brain... lol.. .. Jimi
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