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Grass Upon The Grave


A thank you for their noble trying

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EMB
 
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This is a moving piece of poetry, with a powerfully somber mood. There is respect and gratitude. That's clear. Along with a deep appreciation of efforts. All of this done with a terrific rhyme scheme.

Nicely done, my friend.


 Comment Written 14-Nov-2012



reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
    Thank Edward for your heart felt review. With regard to your video message, first I know well the toilet seat situation, I have four daughters, second, I would add an ending thank you Lord for all my blessings.
    Yours in God,
    Ray
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Good free verse. Liked the meaning of your poem. War is so sad! My 2n cousin committed suicide so they say, 2 weeks after he deployed to Iraq! Country boy of 18. Such a waste! Thank you for sharing!


 Comment Written 14-Nov-2012



reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the review. I am sorry for your "needless" loss.
    Yours in the Lord,
    Ray
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Mai Mai
 
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This is a very nice memorial piece. It hold the departed in high regard while still acknowledging that they were human and will be missed. Good work and good luck.

Mai Mai


 Comment Written 14-Nov-2012



reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
    Thank you
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l.raven
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This is a beautiful tribute to the staff that tried to save your brother. I am so sorry for your loss. Your poem is just beautiful. You should poet this in the hospital. So very touching. God Bless


 Comment Written 14-Nov-2012



reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
    I had the poem cast in bronze and presented it to the Burn Center in a quiet and heart felt small ceremony organized by FDNY.
    Thank you so much for your lovely response.
    Ray
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It's a fine sonnet well done and the feelings deep and honest. Only children's poem have to match meter and rhyme perfectly adult poetry allows for literary conceit sometimes as long as it's kept to a minimum. It would have been alright to have used "Bravely". A fitting tribute.


 Comment Written 14-Nov-2012



reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
    Thank you and God Bless you.
    Ray
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Starlit Ink
 
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I enjoyed this dedication to medical staff, who unfortunately are often taken for granted. You show an appreciation for the valiant effort, even if the result was not what you wanted. The imagery of grass on the grave creates emotion and empathy.


 Comment Written 14-Nov-2012



reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the lovely review.
    Ray
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I like how you wrote this poem. I liked that you dedicated to the medical staff of Cornell Burn Center, that gave their effor to save your brother.

I thought it was a very meaningful poem to write.

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 Comment Written 14-Nov-2012



reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
    Thank you for your lovely review.
    Ray
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Deorre Leonard
 
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What a great tribute to the staff that tried to save your loving brother. You did a great job with this. Thanks for sharing. God Bless... Deorre

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 Comment Written 13-Nov-2012



reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
    Thank you once again dear friend.
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