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Updated with a few new stanzas

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Hello Wanderlost, a marvelous Monday to you. Thank you for sharing your poem, I enjoyed it. The message and rhymes were good.

This is my favorite stanza:

Now privileged ranks control the earth
Weighing out each person's worth
Their tolls impeding progress forth
Reveling in moral dearth

so true


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Beautiful and emotional poem. I really enjoyed reading your poem it flowed easily and was very touching to read. It poured out all the emotions you poured into it. Great read!


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I love the reflective-ness given the Frost's poem. The reflection with that picture creates a remarkable setting!

The Road Not Taken has always been one of my favorites- as a middle school teacher, I was able to impress it upon many an youthful mind.

Your personal reflections apt and eloquent.


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Your poetry tells an amazing story. I enjoyed the way you
blend the thoughts and put the poem together.
Keep on writing. It was a pleasant read.


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I found this read very profound in its given statement, illustrating the poet precise swings of blade, ripping viewpoints I found captivating to my interests. All stated in my opinion concerning this particular read.


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Love this poem and especially this part that resonates with me -scouring mountains turns sand in search for Frost. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.


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SIX STARS 6******BEAUTIFUL so deep profound how mankind sees world interacts with nature causing resources to be destroyed. Very spiritual. Read Review mine also.lolol liberty justice


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    Thank you so much for your kind review! It is always humbling to receive a 6 star review. Best wishes!

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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I enjoyed reading it. The poem makes quite a statement about our relationship to our environment and our lack of caretaking. Well done.


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Your focus on the passerby and what he sees as he travels the earth is well written and deftly described. I enjoyed reading it. I would mention a small nit that I read.

Third stanza... as well know(n)

A good write.

Melissa


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We can find ourselves lost and life in disrepair trying to find the jewels of former times. Searching for them can seem impossible.
Excellent rhyming scheme with a mono rhyme in each stanza.


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