excellent use of mono-rhyming in your quatrains
vivid descriptive detail that creates a woeful mood well
good alliteration in frost's forgotten
good consonance in copious/perfect/passing
great atmosphere in lines like barren land of resigning sighs - also good assonance of long I sounds
You made me read this three times, so it must be good. I guess you're saying we've soiled our nest, not realizing our search for novelty was purchased at the cost to future generations If so, true but sad.
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
Thank you for the kind reviews. And I really appreciate that you understand what I was trying to express.
Your friend in everything, Wanderlost