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Updated with a few new stanzas

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This is so well written, I love the powerful thrust of its theme, (though a few notes would have helped) I was still entranced by the articulate flow, the rhymes fitted well, both slant and natural. The theme and language were beautifully strong, smooth and poetic, well done, good job, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 12-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
    Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate the insight into flow of the poem

reply by royowen on 12-Dec-2019
    Well done
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Born in the fold.."
my favorite line.
I really enjoyed reading this poem.
You have a way of captivating readers.
This was very nicely written
I definitely look forward to reading more ofyour work.


 Comment Written 12-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
    Thank you for the kind review!
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Ah, yes, paradise lost. The vast minions led as sheep by the chosen few who laugh in their vast wealth, relishing the power over the stupid humans we've become.


 Comment Written 09-Dec-2013



reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013
    Thank you for your kind review and interesting thoughts. Best wishes
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rumours and innuendos
rumours of innuendos
 
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Sometimes writers write in their heads a long time before they ever get around to putting it on paper. This is just wonderful. So original and flowing. Amazing imagery and thought provoking at every turn. One of those pieces that stops us in our tracks here when we are busy reviewing and going about our business. I finally pause and read and then read again. Then I get some coffee and read again and think. What a wonderful pleasure. I trust you will post some more of these excellent pieces. Please? So very nice to meet you, mikey


 Comment Written 09-Dec-2013



reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013
    It seems that the best pieces we ever write come to us with a touch of spontaneity. Thank you so much for your generous commentary of my work. your review was touching and I look foreward to seeing some of your own work
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This is truly an amazing, professionally written poem---and for a first one! Very impressive. There are many poetically excellent things about it---it has a classic, perhaps Shakespearean feel, the meter and rhyme are close to perfect, the quatrain format is a structure easy to read, the emotion of the theme comes through from your careful word selection, you have used alliteration effectively, and the enjambment gives the piece a smooth and easy flow. Kudos. How long ago was this? Have you written many since? If so, I hope you'll post them.


 Comment Written 08-Dec-2013


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Amazing and beautiful, you must be new, I don't recolonize your name...but you sure can write a poem my friend...it flows gracefully the rhyming is spot on...reads like a song..very pretty..second last stanza is my favourite...muted fear :)...great job on this


 Comment Written 08-Dec-2013


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Excellent Poem! The poem flowed and connected well. The
rhyming is great and the poem is extremely creative. The poem is descriptive and thought provoking. The author's words are deep..........Thank you, harmony13


 Comment Written 08-Dec-2013


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The AAAA meter is most difficult to achieve. For the most part the poet has achieved this near impossibility with clever elan. For ex:
Once thought to be a noble race
And copious, with perfect grace
passing years have hid their face
Conformity now giving chase

Well done. Was meter supposed to be 8/line?

Regards:


 Comment Written 08-Dec-2013


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This is a deep and brooding poem that bemoans the greatest revelation of adulthood (though this may have been penned by a sulking youth) in that all we had hoped for and were told to expect, was more romanticism than reality. The world belongs to the young, who have all the money. They also have the patience of a rabid dog, the morals of a sailor in Singapore, and the imagination of Lance Armstrong's left nut. Nice poem.


 Comment Written 08-Dec-2013


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The mono-rhyme quatrains work well here to emphasise the subject matter. There are many regrets on our journey, particularly the regret of not leaving the world a better place for those who follow. What powerful lines these are:
The Earth's custodian never there
To fix the tears from lack of care
And reknit the stitches wear


 Comment Written 08-Dec-2013


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