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Wanderlost


Updated with a few new stanzas

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Comment by
Smoothiecool
 
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great picture choice to enhance your poem
your chosen words takes the reader along the road of loss and the choice we need to make for their future
the rhyme works well
flows easy read
cheers SC


 Comment Written 07-Dec-2013


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FrannyG
 
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The great strength of this poem is the even rhythm and mostly strong rhyme. There are some excellent lines such as 'Passing years have hid their face' and 'A barren land of resigning sighs'. The meaning, at times, is a little obscure and coherence a bit loose, but it's worth five stars for the excellence of the rest of it. Well done.


 Comment Written 07-Dec-2013


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wanderlost Very interesting, thoughtful and thought provoking piece. I read it twice. Nicely done. Ribbons most certainly deserved. KG Writes


 Comment Written 07-Dec-2013


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B. Diehl
 
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The simplicity of this poem is what made me fall in love with it. I think I speak for everyone (who loves reading) when I say that the brain needs rest at time. Honestly, writers like Shakespeare and Poe give me a headache after reading too much of them. Great stuff here.

-B Diehl<3

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 Comment Written 07-Dec-2013



reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
    I'm curious, if you loved the work, why did you give me such a poor rating? Haha, well thank you for the kind words. Cheers

    Wanderlost
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J.Byers
 
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This work has reached the exceptional level
A powerful poem, full of shadows and hidden demons. I loved your choice of words in this poem, and the strong, haunting rhymes. Turning wanderlust into something darker gave your work an interesting spin. Well done, wanderlost, an excellent poem.

Blessings,

~ J.


 Comment Written 07-Dec-2013


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Cookie333
 
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Well, I certainly hope you have more of these up your sleeve, this was just lovely to read, it flowed extremely well for this reader my friend,
thanks much for sharing, looking forward to more of your work,
karen


 Comment Written 07-Dec-2013


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allborn66
 
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This is a very interesting poem. You communicate your theme well. The rhyming scheme enhances the piece. The tone is appropriate for the subject matter.
Barbara


 Comment Written 07-Dec-2013


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i think this poem was really deep i am not a fan of deep poems but this one seemed okay maybe try writing about happiness besides it is christmas time!!!:) you did a good job!!!!:)


 Comment Written 07-Dec-2013


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kiwijenny
 
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I love that this poem resonated with you that you chose your user name for it . Wanderlost....cool name...cool photo and cool imagery
Those of the path......those who never settle down because of the yearning to wander ...to find their next adventure
God bless


 Comment Written 07-Dec-2013


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Although well written, it was hard to know if I was on the right track.
Read it a few times, and found solace in different parts of the poem. I thought one or two of the stanzas spoke for themselves rather than belonging to the group.

But, what good stanzas, so it probably my ignorance in trying to find the red thread.

I think I understand the significance of seeking the Garden after death only to find it is not the one which was hoped for.

Perhaps a path...life's way, barren and bare through which once was fair, now just destruction and desolation.

There after our search for the perfect end, only to be disappointed.

I don't know if I am near the mark, but hope so, as it has great individual stanzas. Yes, a few connect with each other, but I had some difficulty in running straight through.

However, who said poems should be easily interpreted?

The writing her is of a good quality.

Best wishes,

RGstar


 Comment Written 07-Dec-2013



reply by the author on 07-Dec-2013
    As with all poetry, the meaning should be unique to the reader. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Best wishes,

    Wanderlost
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