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Love and Thoughts From the Heart

  40 total reviews 
Comment by
TheFlamingo
 
 
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
Rating of Chapter 1 -
The Masters of Fine Verse
I enjoyed having to scroll to the bottom of the Christmas Tree because it made me want to read your poem.
Your extensive vocabulary shows an obvious love of the English language.
The poem held me entranced until the end. You must possess a giving and loving soul. Thank you.



 Comment Written 22-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 23-Jun-2015
    Thanks so much for digging back in my portfolio and finding this sonnet sequence. Your very generous review, very kind comments and bright stars are greatly appreciated. I'm delighted you enjoyed my sonnet.
    Ray
Comment by
dragonpoet
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
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Author Rating For Short Works
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  62
 
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Rating of Chapter 1 -
The Masters of Fine Verse
These sonnets are a good ode to the poets on this site. It does show the talent that is here and how much we inspire each other.

I like the Christmas tree of poets.

Keep writing

dragonpoet


 Comment Written 29-Apr-2015



reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
    Thanks so much for digging into my portfolio and providing this excellent review. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my sonnets. It's sad so many of the poets I mentioned are no longer on-Site. And some have passed away.
    Ray

reply by dragonpoet on 30-Apr-2015

reply by dragonpoet on 30-Apr-2015
    You are so very welcome. It is sad. It's less source of enjoyment and inspiration.

    Joan
Comment by
Phoenix Divine
 
 
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Rating of Chapter 1 -
The Masters of Fine Verse
Wonderful. It is lovely to see the sonnet still inspires some great expressions around here. I hope to see more from you soon.


 Comment Written 26-Jan-2014



reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
    Thank you for this excellent review. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my sonnet.
    Ray
Comment by
poetbear
 
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Rating of Chapter 11 -
'Twas Then I Cried
The last line deserves a ten and so much more.
You said so much and did it so beautifully.
Hard to be caring and sensitive in 2013 but some of us are out there alng with you.
This really touches you and makes you think which is why it needs to be read and savoured.


 Comment Written 04-Aug-2013



reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
    Hi, Maddy
    Thanks so much for this excellent review of my sonnet. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. I apologize for the delayed reply.
    Ray
Comment by
MAMONIA
 
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Rating of Chapter 3 -
Why
Congratulations on your win, my friend. I was so
happy to see that this wonderful and well-written
sonnet won Poem of the Month. It is understandable
that it is on FS Best Poem List.
It is amazing to me how you can write these so well.
You could have been born in the Shakespearean decade.
Lots of luck always.
Marie


 Comment Written 26-Jul-2013



reply by the author on 27-Jul-2013
    Dear Marie,
    Thanks so much for this excellent review and your warm congratulations for my poem placing in the POM. I am truly pleased. I'm delighted you enjoyed my sonnet.
    RayGod
Comment by
PoesyPoet
 
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Rating of Chapter 3 -
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Ah, gorgeous piece of writing Just gorgeous. I can see why this has be chosen for the contest. Very best of luck. It will be some competition with entries like this. PP


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2013



reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
    Good Afternoon, PP
    Thanks so much for this excellent review. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my sonnets.
    Ray
Comment by
MM lives on :)
 
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Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
Rating of Chapter 3 -
Why
Ray, this was an exceptional sonnet sequence you have crafted buddy. This was a Shakespearean CLASSIC in the making, the addition of the imagery you portrayed of a mountainous scene was second to none...

BRAVO! Best wishes and well deserved nomination!


 Comment Written 17-Jul-2013



reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
    Thanks so much, Christopher, for this most generous review of my sonnet. Your very kind comments and many bright stars are greatly appreciated. I'm delighted you enjoyed my poetry.
    -ray
Comment by
Quillian
 
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Rating of Chapter 3 -
Why
Moving, conflicted piece presented in high language. I liked the image of Bacchus filling the glass with red wine and the narrator turning to him and wine because of a decision he cannot make. Congratulations on being picked for Poem of the Month. And, good luck. Quillian


 Comment Written 17-Jul-2013



reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
    Good Evening, Quillian,
    Thanks so much for this excellent review. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my sonnet.
    Ray
Comment by
Just2Write
 
Review Stars
 
 
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
Rating of Chapter 11 -
'Twas Then I Cried


Good work on the editing of this Blank Verse Sonnet -
A beautifully written poem, Ray. One can feel the love and the sorrow of this poem. I liked how you took the reader into the dream which came from exhaustion of the work-week and let us see the peace and passion there, and then, how that sweet dream was lost in a clap of thunder. The feeling of sorrow for the lost dream, and the lost love, was so touching and such a beautiful glimpse into the heart of one who has loved.


 Comment Written 16-Jul-2013



reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
    Good Afternoon, Rose
    Thanks so much for this most gracious review of my sonnet. I'm blown away with your kind comments and many bright stars. Thank you also for your keen eye and suggested edits which greatly improved the poem. I am most grateful. You've just made me smile so broadly this evening. Thank you, Rose!
    -Ray
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