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luvsux66
Smoking and drinking takes years of yer
life, well I don't smoke or drink enough
 
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Refrain
My,My, this is quite the about face from your rogue poem, will the Real Marillion please stand up! although an homage to an artist and his song, I'll imagine that this poem more accuratley mirrors your soul.-LUV


 Comment Written 19-Apr-2005


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Alexandra Adele
Alexandra
Adele
 
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Refrain
I really really really like this very much (could you tell?). You have a lot of skill, and it flows very nicely. I love it!


 Comment Written 18-Apr-2005


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MelSargent
 
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A Cautionary Tale
I enjoyed the way you told this tale, the subtle alliteration, the count and the humour (It was humour...right?)

This poem reminded me of what I've been missing here since life got in the way...

Anyway, well done and good luck with poemof the month,

Cheers!


 Comment Written 18-Apr-2005


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Eldora
 
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Refrain
For the twenty-seventh time. Is that all? Try picturing a teenage granddaughter who filled up an entire CD with that song and then played it all night long when visiting us. I think I prefer your version.


 Comment Written 18-Apr-2005


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giftsun
 
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Refrain
Sixteen syllable count per line, still managing to keep the meter and foot consistent! That's really something. Sometimes I even lost count and had to start over. I gotta give something like that a try, soon as I get a chance to spend two weeks in the mountains of Tibet. :-) Great work, my friend.

Who woulda thunk inhearsed was a real word? :-)


 Comment Written 18-Apr-2005


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Zenbud
 
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What a lovely piece. Although I should subtract a star for putting that song in my HEAD! Argh . . . this is my favorite line: The bustling breezes of October framed the frost of autumn's breath, Until its glower, cold and sober, shaped the ghost of summer's death

Really enjoyed this, my first read of your work. Zen


 Comment Written 18-Apr-2005


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ladykay
 
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Refrain

Hi Marillion...

Some walls never come down...! I sigh and say, right! It may seem like they have, but only for that beguiling second that gets lost away in time.

If you could read my mind, you would know how I feel about these choice words that you have wruitten here in fine poetry form.

"Arising slowly, I created isolationistic will,
In stainless steel and armor-plated to forestall a second kill."

You do a good job when you do your job...

ladykay


 Comment Written 18-Apr-2005


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madbaggage
 
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Some walls never work, either, if her extinguished torch still burns 'you'.

Nice to see a change in layout, like a chorus amongst the verses. I enjoy this more if I imagine it as a play rather than the real you - I'm sure you dont really reek of burning martyr and arent really drowning in self pity, as the constant re-playing of the record suggests.

I look forward to your character being less self involved in the next work! At least it works as a page turner, I want to know if he's going to get his act together, hehe.
I seriously hope I havent just opened my mouth long enough to wedge both feet in sideways.....
:-)


 Comment Written 18-Apr-2005


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That is a killer tune, isn't it, another classic I love of his is Sundown. But enough about that, this is a great poem, well written and full of some very nice imagery and the flow is superb, thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 18-Apr-2005


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ROCHELLE MOORE
 
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what a truly professional piece of poetry. A real jewel. I can only aspire to write half as well as you do. Your poetry contains a story within a story and i thoroughly enjoyed it from start to finish.


 Comment Written 18-Apr-2005


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